Star Trek Fic - Penance Chapter Two

Aug 15, 2010 01:51

PENANCE Chapter Two
by SlwMtionDaylite

Written for reel_startrek, Round Two

Based upon the film Atonement, written by Christopher Hampton (based upon the novel by Ian McEwan) and directed by Joe Wright

Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I own nothing. Paramount, et al. own all. I really wish they would let me borrow Spock for a while though. Atonement owned by ( Read more... )

character: uhura, character: kirk, ship: spock/uhura, writings: fanfic, fanfic: star trek xi, character: spock, writings: challenge, .full length - penance

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theworldsforgot September 6 2010, 06:21:33 UTC
This is very well done so far. I love how you translated Robbie's relationship to his mother here with Spock.

The only potential concern here is that in Atonement, even though Briony is a stupid bitch and overall life ruiner, at the end of the day, she was just a naive 13 year-old girl. It may have subconsciously been motivated by her childhood crush on Robbie but I don't think she even realizes this until she's an adult. Kirk is a grown man and while situations can be misinterpreted, he seems to be motivated by something more sinister than just misunderstanding. That is to say, I think he'll have to do more than just write a book about them 50 years later to atone.

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