from flame to dust

[edoriko]

broken!kaiyeol & sekai
pg-13; 1.6k
sometimes we fall out of love

Comments

[galbijiim]

I THINK YOU JUST HATE MY OTP

but falling out of love yeh booohoo makes sense T___T

[edoriko]

OuO hahah I'm still surprised you read this.

yeah... makes sense... ;;___;;

[euphorias]

I really like this! I like how Jongin was slowly untangling himself from his relationship with Chanyeol and allowing himself to be further piqued by Sehun. It's actually kinda realistic, because yeah, this is indeed what happens in life sometimes, regardless of whether we want it to happen or not.

Thanks for writing!

[edoriko]

Thank you! ;w; I was going for a realistically melancholy kind of story... because even though it may be sad it's also just a change towards something different.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[helloimrayn]

ogod idk why but i like it sfm it's just idk what to say omfg maybe the same as what previous commentator says that it's so realistic;w;
thanks for writing this! but ouch chankai

[edoriko]

Ahhh I'm glad that you liked it and found it realistic. ;w;

Thanks for reading and commenting!

(and yes, ouch... broken fics kill me haha)

[knotweed]

i love how quiet your writing is and how naturally jongin and chanyeol fall apart. the constant undercurrent of melancholy is gorgeous, but i think the way jongin accepts his falling out of love is even more so; my favorite part (and also the bit that hurt me the most!) was at the very beginning when jongin says his bracelet wasn't special at all, even if he knew that at one point of his life it was. this is beautiful.

[edoriko]

oh my I'm so happy you liked the writing style... ;u; ahhh your whole comment just makes me flop around on the floor in happiness, thank you! TT w TT

[edoriko]

ahh thanks~

Yes, it makes a lot of sense! And I'm glad you felt that way because that's exactly the type of feeling I was going for! ;u;

hahaha evil broccoli