Comments | slipintoadream: (try to) arrange me

edoriko in slipintoadream

(try to) arrange me

Jan 15, 2013 17:55

(try to) arrange me
Xiumin/Luhan
PG-13; Fluff/Slice of Life; ~8,000 words
In which Xiumin and Luhan can be described as stationary, and Xiumin's not sure if he's ready to reorder his pens.

( In which Xiumin and Luhan can be described as stationary, and Xiumin's not sure if he's ready to reorder his pens. )

!fanfic, author: edoriko, rating: pg-13, length: one-shot, pairing: xiumin/luhan

Comments 32

edoriko January 16 2013, 00:30:45 UTC

spot for lan ^^

carbonization January 19 2013, 18:51:45 UTC

off topic, but, pilot 0.5mm pens are great. the ink is always vibrant.

edori-jie this is so nice. in a sense i feel as if xiumin and luhan did not undergo massive character developments; which is nice to read. their relationship moves slowly, but that makes it all the more realistic, because in reality, most interactions aren't always rapid-fire fast.

the ending was great. xiumin misunderstanding luhan is something that befits his characterization very well.

:D it's awesome, jiejie! and hank you for the spot~

edoriko January 19 2013, 19:49:59 UTC

ahhhh lan-mei mei /hugsss/ Thank you! ;v;

I'm glad the pacing came across as being realistic, because I was a bit afraid it was too slow. :))

Ah, I'm so happy you liked it!^^ Thank you for commenting and the feedback!

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edoriko January 16 2013, 08:00:04 UTC

Ah, I'm glad that you liked the ending! haha maybe I should have added more happy scenes... ;v;

And don't worry! I know what you mean!

To me, having arguments show that they don't have unrealistic/idealistic expectations about each other... So they accept each other's flaws and are still want to work through it, and to me that's a much happier and healthier alternative to never fighting. =v=

Thanks for commenting! ^v^

sandra_hall January 16 2013, 08:18:01 UTC

omg this was so cute!...and sad...but cute too!

xiuhan!

for the sake of closure, did kyungsoo and jongin get married? lol

edoriko January 16 2013, 08:42:49 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! >v<

haha! Actually, I hadn't continued their story in my head... (maybe that would be a good sequel). ^^

Hmm I imagine that they aren't married yet... Kyungsoo is a chef at an upscale restaurant, so he gets off late most days, and Jongin (now part of a contemporary dance troupe) waits for Kyungsoo outside the restaurant so that he can walk him home. On the walk home sometimes they stop at a street vendor for tteokbokki and remember their high school days.

But they still have separate apartments. Jongin spends most days at Kyungsoo's so everyone tells him that he should just sell his place already. But Jongin travels a lot for his job, so he feels that if they have separate places Kyungsoo won't miss him as much when he's away (although he doesn't know that Kyungsoo is waiting for Jongin to move in).

Ah, sorry for rambling! I guess the short answer would be: no, not yet. ;)

kamakazza January 16 2013, 08:52:14 UTC

If I could work from home I would be exactly like Xiumin in this story and that is kind of scary. I need to find me some friends or get myself a Luhan

edoriko January 16 2013, 23:23:17 UTC

yeah, sometimes I feel like if I didn't have to go to school I'd never leave my apartment... ;v;

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edoriko January 19 2013, 06:36:08 UTC

AHHH CAT I'M SO HAPPY. ;v; /hugssss/ AHHHHH

hahaha yeah I was trying to think of a proper job for Tao and all I could think of was fashion and being FABULOUS.

I'm working on a Kaisoo sequel, but I wanted to make it happy and I'm dying in the fluff. >o< omg I'm not sure if I can write happy stuff.... /collapses/

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edoriko January 19 2013, 07:53:36 UTC

YES HE IS FABULOUS AND SULKY hahahaha omg bitchy Tao is the best

don't worry they will reconnect :DDDD and omg I don't know but I will try