new song for the wintersville show

[slingingink]

okay so heres the "finished" product. im sure ill be changeing alot of it but i promised a few ppl id post it n shit.
open to suggestions for it so please feel free to do so
oh by the way looking for title suggestions too

"untitled"
V1: movies n non-sense
papers and magazines
all those excuses
not to get close to me
meaningless distractions
I know im still in your dreams
so why not be honest
why not just let us be
.....
Chorus: this cant go on
a moment longer
let me hold you
let me love you
I can’t take all these false smiles
When on the inside I know im dying

V2: wake me up one foggy morning
Let me know you feel you’re choking
Tell me that you just can’t take it
I give you my heart n you just break it

|Chorus|

V3: we said hello we said goodbye
You made me laugh you made me cry
You kissed me in the dark, the light
You kissed me and it felt so right

|Chorus|

V4:on the inside I know im dying
I wish I could just let things slide and
I wanna hold you through the night
And wake up to that gorgeous smile

Chorus: this cant go on
a moment longer
let me hold you
let me love you
I cant take all these false smiles
When on the inside I know im dying
On the inside I know im dying.
On the inside I know im dyin….