This was really sexy. Period kinks aren't usually my thing, but I was utterly drawn to this fic, especially because of the relationship you painted between Kirk and McCoy. I *love* that they're shmoopy and married. The little quips about Joanna and dangers to his manhood, weddings rings, shower sex, shmoop shmoop shmoop! I love it all.
The only small loophole that I wondered about was whether or not she put protection back on before getting into bed. I can't imagine I'd be too pleased waking up in a spot of blood. Sorry, sounds gross to say I know, but it's a fact. The ending was very sweet, and this was the only inconsistency that I found.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! You know...you raise a very valid point, and it totally skipped my mind, though you are completely right. Thanks for pointing it out!
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I really enjoyed this. Great fill.
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The only small loophole that I wondered about was whether or not she put protection back on before getting into bed. I can't imagine I'd be too pleased waking up in a spot of blood. Sorry, sounds gross to say I know, but it's a fact. The ending was very sweet, and this was the only inconsistency that I found.
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