collab: ode to arashi's hands

Jan 14, 2010 12:28

The following five drabble-type things were written originally in floweranza's journal here, spurred on by her 25-word promptfics you can find here. But because we loved them so much, we both decided to put them on our writing journals to show the world. These are all genfic, Arashi-related, no pairings, and rated PG I guess for mentions of sexy things.

1. Ode to Ohno's Hands (littlealex) )

rating: pg, fic: arashi, genre: gen, pairing: none, word count: 1000-2500, fic: je

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rhythmia January 15 2010, 10:13:26 UTC
Uwaah, lj ate my comment. Trying again. Mmmm, this collaboration is gorgeous. Here from floweranza. Well done, using their hands as a jumping off point to explore their relationships with each other, other people, the world around them, and their characters. It's so *them*. <3

He loves his hands when they create things he can't explain, when they hold things he doesn't really understand, when they feel a new texture that the world has to offer, when they tingle as he touches a familiar plane of skin, when they make someone's eyes close and mouth open and breathe his name. Oh. Oh.<3

He can't change them, but sometimes Nino amuses himself (when he's alone) by pulling on his fingers and humming to himself, "Let's get longer?" I just find this so adorable and fitting, even though it's not an interpretation I would have thought of. Oh Nino.

In the same way that his flexibility is thanks to noticing the way his muscles twinge with certain motions, and his slim figure is thanks to noticing the smallest protrusion of his stomach after a week of eating nothing but conbini bentos, his soft and manicured hands can be explained by his keeping constant watch of his skin. Oh Junface. And that whole paragraph you have on his skincare. ^^

Then she'd reached out to his hand and sighed, said, "They've gotten so big." Oh Sho!Mom. *sighs* Also hee where (and when?!) is that picture from?

And when they squeeze back, he always grins, bright and shining, because an expression wrapped in a touch speaks straight to his heart. Mmmm, perfect ending. Also hahahaha Aiba's RULES OF LIFE book. Awesome.

Again, well done!

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littlealex January 17 2010, 08:56:55 UTC
♥♥♥♥ Thank you so much for the kind words! We enjoyed writing them so much :D:D

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