Concrit post.

[slaygirl]

Most of you have seen my writing from time to time, and I've had the pleasure of roleplaying with several of you on various occasions.

I'm looking for constructive criticism, on both my writing and my roleplaying, as I'm looking to improve myself on both counts; be as honest as possible, and go as hard as you can.

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