some notes for a rewrite: thedialogtitleexperiment. OBJECTIVE is description of panels MATCH TO: SND
Need to emphasize scenes leading up to the café so that eventually reveals whatever BIERde is doing, it's his feed we're looking at.
Specific sound direction combining EXT. sounds at café, INT/EXT. automobile sounds AND INT. typewriter (at RSdevPubl)
the bolded text is dialog I'm considering re-arranging to reduce dialog and BREAKING WITH ORIG. DIALOG