Writing

[slavetopassion]

So yesterday, I was in the kitchen doing dishes and words just started flowing in my brain. I went to the computer and started writing and this is what came out. It was over as fast as it started. Its definitely an example of how I purge through writing.

NothingThere was nothing left. As if the world he had known were suddenly sucked into a black

Comments

[vanima_luhta]

This makes my heart hurt. But as always, it's eloquently written. Bravo, darling!

[slavetopassion]

Thank you sugar plum!

[bleedtoblue]

I especially like that last line.

And because I can't help myself, it's beseeched.

[slavetopassion]

lol! Thats the way I wrote it in the text and it said it was wrong so I tried changing it then went to dictionary.com and found I was right but forgot to change it back. I suck. :)

[bleedtoblue]

I figured you just wrote and didn't beta because the writing was flowing, always a wonderful thing. You don't suck. *smooches*

[beauty_forashes]

I really like this because it's so well-written and evocative, I just wish it wasn't so "real", you know? :/

*hugs*

[shenya]

punchy :)

*huggles*

[erryl]

Well written. You make the reader feel like he/she is there. I really like it! ^_^ *hugs*