"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 5 Orlibean

[slave_o_spike]

So here it is.

BTW, Griffon, Joe and I saw Rambo last weekend. It was okay. Only, I think there was more blood and gore than in Peter Jackson's Braindead.

Title: Death Does Not Become HimPairing: Orlibean

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[slave_o_spike]

Okay...now I can focus on your fb, which I love immensely.

And yes! I loved talking to you too! Sometimes its really nice to put a voice to the person. :)

And thank you again for the fantastic beta.

I really wanted to show Sean's POV here because I wanted to show that he'd been after Orli for awhile and that yes, he is a big sweetheart because I think for the most part, he is. He's so quiet and reserved but I get that he would be the kind of person you could relate to.

LOL! I was worried about making them too awkward at first, because they work so well together in the previous chapters, but the thing is, they are so nervous about being together at first because they both don't want to screw it up so yeah, clumsiness and hysterics abound. :)

I was glad their first time together would come off as it did, with a final happy with both of them. Made it all worth it and yeah, going from that to the vision - well, let's just say, I rewrote that one over and over again to get it just right and even then, with your help I finally nailed it.

Yes! One of the reasons for doing Sean's POV, was I wanted to show how Sean saw Orli's strangeness and what his feelings were toward it. Can't strangle Eric - it's not in the cards for him. :P

Chapter 6 will be come soon (obviously, you'll be the first to know) - it'll be...different. :)

*hugs and squishes you*

Thank you!!!!!