Well, here it is!
The long awaited chapter!
I want to thank
shadownyc for going over it and making sure it flowed right and wasn't too confusing.
Also, I will get back to fb from the last chapter - I just wanted to concentrate on this!
Enjoy!
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Spoiler Warning for this fic - Enter at your own risk )
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Love it!!!!
*fat grin*
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Thanks!!!
Remember, one chapter to go.
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The courage and love that both Brians displayed in the face of the Guardians was very well done. I liked the fact that the Guardians were "reading" the Brians, assessing their worth. I pity the guardian(s) that let this all take place, they are not going to like the consequences.
Joe is great. "Joe," Joe said, "and you owe me pie." I can here this line in that distinct Buscemi way. And this just made me laugh. "Brian!" Michael yelled as he came running over. "Jesus! You're okay. Shit, all that screaming and moaning...."
"Yeah, and that was just from monkey boy," Joe said as he pointed to Michael.
This has been a great ride and I am glad it is not quite over.
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Whew!
And Joe, yeah, I love Joe.
And nope, not quite over. One more chapter to go. Thanks!!!
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Justin stepped back from Brian. "Jo! You gave us the wrong Brian!" Justin said in a panic.
*laughs* Finally, they are together! This was so great =)
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*wipes forehead*
Had to keep the humor in! :)
Thank you.
One more chapter to go...
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You know, if someone told me about a qaf fic with parallel worlds, with walls that move and monsters that want to eat you alive (or suck out all your energy) I would have laughed and not have given it a second glance, but you not only made it good, you made it enjoyable.
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I can't believe I wrote a QaF story with 60's style horror movie stuff...and it was well received! I was extremely hesitant to post this but the stats speak for themselves.
Thank you for that. It's always great to hear someone like my story despite what the premise is. :)
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*throws self down on bed and finally is able to sleep*
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LOL! You sent bunny after me!!!
So should I wait for you to catch up on your sleep so I can get some fb?
*taps foot*
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