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QaF Fic Update - Something Seriously Amiss Part 2a

Jul 09, 2006 19:05

Sorry for the ridiculous delay. The restaurant has been keeping me super busy along with my kids (and then there was the 4th of July which is a big deal around here). I've demanded at least 1 hour a day to do some serious writing (not an hour where everyone and their brother is bothering me). Maybe I'll rant about my employees in another post ( Read more... )

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asm614 July 10 2006, 02:41:53 UTC

OMG.... BEST LINE EVER:

I refuse to lick my own ass.

This is so much fun!! Hehe.

slave_o_spike July 10 2006, 05:05:59 UTC

Well, would you want to? Ewww! LOL!

Thanks for the fb!

xnickstax July 10 2006, 02:43:57 UTC

hahaha OMG what a crack up! you gotta love this really, what drama queens. Do continue, im loving the story here its not your usual conventional story and I like that. Purely being honest here, I can't wait for more.

slave_o_spike July 10 2006, 05:07:39 UTC

I simply had to show their 'drama queen' sides.

Just wait for the office and the diner! *wink wink*

More to come. Thanks!

buttrfli_80 July 10 2006, 03:07:17 UTC

Brian started to strut around the room swishing his butt back and forth. "Look at me and my new boot-tay."

That line killed me. I can't wait to see what these two get into as they try and solve this mystery.

slave_o_spike July 10 2006, 05:08:46 UTC

You know, I almost didn't use that line - I thought it would be too much. I'm glad I did.

Yeah, these two are going to take us for quite a ride. Thanks!

crazy4qaf July 10 2006, 03:13:54 UTC

Oh...wow...*amazed* Um, yeah...you can write porn ANYTIME, hon. This part was fucking priceless! *lol* Cuz this:

"Oh God. I almost forgot...," Justin said while unzipping his fly. "Woo Hoo! I have a nine inch dick ( ... )

slave_o_spike July 10 2006, 05:10:34 UTC

What body swap story would be complete without mention of I their new *ahem* 'acquisitions.'

And I'm glad I could please on the porn. Seriously, I was very hesitant about writing it. Thanks for the lovely fb!

jillapet July 10 2006, 03:22:33 UTC

Too cute. The swapped body sex was wonderful-I love the "I have a really tight ass" part.

slave_o_spike July 10 2006, 05:12:14 UTC

I'm glad the sex part worked out. *wipes forehead*

Can you imagine Brian saying that line as he's deep in Justin's ass?!

Thanks for the fb!