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It Never Gets Easier [9/13]

Jan 21, 2008 21:51

Title: It Never Gets Easier [9/13]
Author: likeanaccidentx
Pairing: Adam Lazzara/John Nolan.
Rating: Story, right now, stands at R overall.
Summary: And it's so typical of you to be constantly torn between your options; but you figure it's because there's never a good one to begin with. Each option always has a drawn out and painful end, and you're ( Read more... )

Comments 6

tricky_slip January 21 2008, 22:51:51 UTC

gah...
another absolutly fabulous chapter [s]despite what you may think of it[/s]. =]
i think what really always blows me away with your writing is the attention to detail and the little snippets here and there that just solidify adam's character, his hurt and his desperation and his deep love for this boy who can't love him back, who won't.
it burns to read.

and how you ended this chapter with the beginning of their relationship...
it was bitter because i knew what was in their future, but it was still something that made me melt and wish with all my heart that things will work out in the end for them
woah.
ranty comment.

but i adore this story.
you know that.
=] ♥

likeanaccidentx January 22 2008, 07:13:27 UTC

Thank you so much.
=]].
I'll try to update ASAP but it might be difficult. Exams start today.
=[.

wakexthedead January 22 2008, 01:16:06 UTC

And you think it over for a moment; really think it over. Because really, that’s not a question, of course you love him; you live and breathe him, he occupies your thoughts and dreams every second of the day.

This is so good. That line just... God, I don't even know. It's SO GOOD. That's all I can think right now.

I love this story. I love how everything fits together so perfectly and the past is strung together seamlessly with the present.

LOVE. <3

likeanaccidentx January 22 2008, 07:14:53 UTC

Thank youuu. ♥
I had to throw the memory in there; the idea came to me and it was too sweet and... sad when mixed with what I had planned for this chapter.
I'm glad you like it. =].

roekkvi January 22 2008, 08:21:05 UTC

I'm sorry I didn't comment last time, but my internet is somewhat fucked up and I got exams right now and yeah...I'm sorry.
This story is so sad because everybody is hurting so bad and it seems like there is just no way to make it any better and it's just really really sad. Damn, I wish John would just have the balls to say "fuck them all" but I know it isn't very realistic. Life isn't that easy.
I really love this fic, your writing is so beautiful, I'm totally jealous!
I think this was my fav line:
And it's so typical of you to be constantly torn between your options; but you figure it's because there's never a good one to begin with.

And I'm really impressed how you manage to combine the past with the present, it always fits completely! Oh, and I can't wait to learn more about Jesse, he's a really interesting character in this!
So again, thanks for posting and btw, your updating schedule rocks!

likeanaccidentx January 22 2008, 17:00:52 UTC

Don't apologize; I've got exams, too. And it's not like I expect you to comment.
But thank you for commenting. And of course, reading.
Funnily enough, I hate my style of writing for this piece? I haven't written in over a year - writers block - and when I tried to recently, this disjointed weird style came out.
So it's nice to hear that you like it.
You'll quite possibly get to hear about Jesse a little more in the next chapter.
=].