need a beta!
Is anyone online tonight and available to beta 1300 words or so of porn? Morgan is my usual beta of course - but seeing as it's a birthday gift for her- I thought i'd get somebody else to do the work :P - I just need a quick check for grammar/typos/stupidity the usual - tell me if something doesn't work or make sense.
It's a Breezy/Sarah/Dallon (and sorta Brendon too - tho he's not in the scene - it's an established foursome) - it's a kink bingo fill for nippleplay and pervertibles and there is some mild painplay, bondage, pegging and double pen (two holes :P)in a consensual bdsm 4some so if any of that isn't for you well...
Hit me with your email - I'll screen comments - and I'll add you to the doc . :)
ETA: I got it covered! Thanks to everyone who offered!!
It's a Breezy/Sarah/Dallon (and sorta Brendon too - tho he's not in the scene - it's an established foursome) - it's a kink bingo fill for nippleplay and pervertibles and there is some mild painplay, bondage, pegging and double pen (two holes :P)in a consensual bdsm 4some so if any of that isn't for you well...
Hit me with your email - I'll screen comments - and I'll add you to the doc . :)
ETA: I got it covered! Thanks to everyone who offered!!