Ficlet: Pick Up The Pieces, Take Them Home

May 01, 2009 22:13

Title: Pick Up The Pieces, Take Them Home
Author: eviltwin
Fandoms: Flashpoint
Pairing: Ed, Greg.
Rating: Gen.
Wordcount: 209
Summary: Prompt : Scars (prompt from flashpoint_sru). Marginal angst. Ed contemplates the scars they all hide.
Disclaimer: None of the following is true in any way, and no profit is made from this work of fiction.

pick up the pieces, take them home )

character: ed, rating: gen, character: greg, length: 500 words or less

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paranoid_woman May 1 2009, 21:21:17 UTC
That was BEAUTIFUL. I loved every single sentence, I'd like to highlight them all. It's so angsty and yet the feelings are so true.

You broke me and I love you for it.

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eviltwin May 3 2009, 16:54:40 UTC
Aw, thank you honey! ~hugs~ Sorry for not replying sooner, I had a very busy day yesterday. I'm so pleased you liked this, though. I think I'm starting to get there with the characters at last :)

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blackpanther07 May 1 2009, 21:23:14 UTC
Wow hun, this is beautiful.

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eviltwin May 3 2009, 16:55:22 UTC
~hugs~ Thank you, sweetie! x

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lillyg May 1 2009, 21:26:08 UTC
Great one, really beautiful! I'm glad you suggested the prompt to post this!

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eviltwin May 3 2009, 16:56:19 UTC
Thank you so much! I liked this prompt too, hehe. ;)

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bloody_adorable May 22 2009, 20:04:23 UTC
Gah, it's so true. Greg just shoulders SO MUCH.

This was really fantastic. I'm sorry I'm so behind in reading, but I'm hopefully making up for it today!

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eviltwin May 22 2009, 20:18:14 UTC
It's okay sweetheart! I know you have work and a life! But yaaay you read it! And yes, he does. Like I keep saying, man needs a hug. ~nods~

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strongwriter September 14 2011, 12:34:07 UTC
You definitely reached the core of the matter in so few words. This is beautiful. The pain is tangible. I love this <3

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