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Ficlet: Whipped

Jun 25, 2009 14:20

Title: Whipped
Author: eviltwin
Fandoms: Flashpoint
Pairing/Characters: Greg/Wordy
Rating: Adult..ish.
Wordcount: 250
Summary: Prompt : Fantasy (in that this is like my fantasy - LOL!)
Disclaimer: None of the following is true in any way, and no profit is made from this work of fiction.

( Whipped )

pairing: wordy/greg, rating: adult, length: 500 words or less

Comments 11

bloody_adorable June 25 2009, 14:15:47 UTC

OMG I READ SOMETHING ON HERE. It's almost like I'm on VACATION or something!

'This' is Wordy, spread-eagled on top of the sheets, butt-naked save for what seems to be half a tin of whipped cream slowly melting from its position of maintaining his dignity.

Okay, I have to marry that sentence. I absolutely ADORE how that is put together. Thank you, fic writer, for using English. SO many bad fics out there are...well, not English. LOL

Overall, just a really sweet, really YUMMY fic. ;P Ya done good, mate!

eviltwin June 26 2009, 17:34:57 UTC

Spoookeh! :P

And aw, thank you sweetheart! I'm so pleased you read it :D ~squishesyouhard~

lillyg June 25 2009, 14:17:19 UTC

That was hot and funny!

By the way I think you could like this picture http://fangedfem.deviantart.com/art/because-we-share-life-16216518

enjoy the cuteness!

Hugs

eviltwin June 26 2009, 17:35:35 UTC

I DID LIKE THAT PICTURE VERY MUCH. :D So cute!

And thank you, hon, glad you enjoyed the fic too. Not heavy on plot, just light and fluffy. Just what I needed. ;)

paranoid_woman June 25 2009, 17:02:10 UTC

Ohhhhh, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, INDEED!! *g*

I loved Greg's reaction to his sexy!Wordy... And then...

"It's not quite the same. Would you mind getting started before I ruin your sheets?"

XD That was absolutely funny!

And yes, yes, yes... what a DELICIOUS surprise! ;)

paranoid_woman June 25 2009, 20:51:46 UTC

And YES, I'm still so glad you wrote this!! *g*

eviltwin June 26 2009, 17:36:29 UTC

I think I would laugh too if presented with such a sight...and then of course I would do what Greg did and dive right in BWAHAH. :D

Thank you, hon! ~hugs~ I have another one which will soon be ready to post...on a roll now!

paranoid_woman June 26 2009, 17:52:51 UTC

Another one? *g*

YAY!!!!!

elandae June 26 2009, 01:40:36 UTC

Oh, Wordy. lol His reaction to Greg's reaction is fabulous. I'm sure Greg appreciates the surprise nonetheless ;) (And will show Wordy just how much he does)

eviltwin June 26 2009, 17:37:21 UTC

~giggles~ Bless them both! And yes, Greg will definitely be showing his, ahem, appreciation. With his tongue, mostly. >.> Thank yooou!

elandae June 27 2009, 06:35:19 UTC

Because,like us, Greg is a very polite boy,. (and yes, I realize I just accidentally called us both boys, but focus on the Greg/Wordy-ness and not my gender issues LOL)