If I never read the words "the other man" instead of a character's name in a fanfic again it will be too soon. Just repeat the damn names. With the name, I see the person. With "the other man" I see the words the.other.man, and have to stop and think about it. Clunky
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perfectly lovely fics RUINED by 'but i didn't want to use their names too often'.
those are their NAMES. the next best thing to being there.
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