Running Game

Aug 13, 2011 12:01

Title: Running Game ( Read more... )

john cena, alex riley, slash, darker, wrestling, smut, fic, wwe

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legacychickno1 August 13 2011, 13:35:41 UTC
I was jumping up and down, clapping my hands in excitement when I got the reminder that you posted a new story :P

And what a fine piece of art it was again!

Loved the fact that John wasn't Mr. Nice Guy for once and ALEX of all people as his 'partner' in this made it so much sweeter to read.

Absolutely brilliant writing again and a damned good plot for something smutty. Always enjoy reading smut in the context of more.

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slashburd August 13 2011, 16:44:15 UTC
Aww you're too kind <3

I've wanted to use A-Ri in something for ages but didn't want to write him/Miz - I don't like writing Miz much so I avoid him if I can lol

And ty for the kind comment about the story of it all - I'm all for some PWP stuff but to have sex at least fit into a story somewhere makes it easier to write and so much easier for me to read!

Thanks again for your comment <3

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showmescars August 13 2011, 14:39:10 UTC
I think you wrote them both very well. Love that John wasn't the typical superhero of his ring persona & nice that Alex spoke up for himself.

“You know what Cena, before I go let's both forget whatever just happened in there, okay? What they all say about you is true and I don't want anyone to know I was dumb enough to fall for the act. So, Mr nice guy, you make me sick. And for the record, it's not a turn on when you can't remember to say the right guy's name when your dick is up his ass. Smooth move, champ.”

If ever there was a promo for WWE slash, this should be it. I read it & said, "OOH! OWNED!" right out loud. LMAO!

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slashburd August 13 2011, 16:45:56 UTC
I have a tendency to make John a complete goof - that's pretty how he is in my head when he's not having a super miserable time of it (see above lol)

A-Ri is a dark horse imho -he's been given just the right amount of rawwwr to his character at the moment and he's not a meek lil thing that would just let John get away with saying someone else's name - or at least that's how I see it!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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messyjessy08 August 13 2011, 17:14:38 UTC

Oh I loved it! Cena being a bit of an asshole was new, but very refreshing. Alex telling him off was HI-larious and I was totally encouraging him on with that.

and I love the extra layer the ending added to the overall story--that Randy might not have actually cheated and John had just ruined everything. not necessarily a happy ending, but an entertaining one nonetheless.

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slashburd August 13 2011, 22:04:07 UTC
I don't usually write John with that kind of slant - I guess I love that giant goof a bit too much - but the idea for this kinda jumped me so I had to write it :)

I'm not always a big out-and-out PWP fan so I like to have a little bit of story there too. I usually dole out the happy endings like Skittles but not this time XD

Thank you for reading and commenting <33

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slashburd August 13 2011, 22:08:22 UTC
I didn't want A-Ri to be this totally faceless and spineless guy - the fact that he isn't is what makes me like his character so much :) The weirdest thing is that I wrote it and even I can't decide if Randy was cheating or not lol

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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slashburd August 15 2011, 01:27:19 UTC
Well I'm just glad you enjoyed it <3

It was a tough one to write actually, you know how I love dumbass goofy John above all else. To make him such an asshole was not easy at all!! As I said in a reply above I've no idea in my own head whether or not Randy was cheating - usually I write stuff with a fully formed story but not this time :S

I am also unhappy about Hunter being a stirrer, or maybe a good friend, maybe both, I don't know lol All I know is that John is effed up in all this whatever happens *pets stoopid John* :D

Thank you so much for reading and here's hoping you never do anything as daft as John. Apart from maybe using A-Ri for sex lol

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