For slashababy drop-out: Sense Memories

Dec 31, 2008 15:05

Title: Sense Memories
Recipient: slashababy drop-out
Author: caras_galadhon
Pairing: Viggo/Orlando, Viggo/Karl, Viggo/Craig, Viggo/Ian
Rating: R
Summary: Being with Viggo was a feast for the senses.
Pre-reveal Notes: The recipient asked for a number of really fascinating pairings, so I plucked out the ones that had something in common and went to work from there ( Read more... )

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feelforfaith January 1 2009, 03:36:04 UTC
I love your idea to show Viggo through four different senses of four different people.

This is probably my favorite description of Viggo:

The tune was something strange, an exotic almost-cacophony that curled in the shell of Orlando's ear, bringing with it echoes of places he'd never visited but always returned to, people he'd never met but had always known.

Wonderful fic!

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savageseraph January 1 2009, 04:12:17 UTC
Wow. I really like the different pairings and the switch in perspective and sensory detail in each. The language in this fic is very rich and evocative. It's also really steamy.

Maybe his fantasy-self begged them, maybe he pleaded, maybe he ordered and argued and insisted. Maybe he spread himself wide, or pressed deep and firmly in; a different feat, a different debauched deviation driving every desire.

Love that detail. Mmmmm. The language is lovely, and the whole idea is just nice to think about.

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slashfairy January 1 2009, 08:22:39 UTC
this is grand. i'm so glad i read it. well done.

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stormatdusk January 1 2009, 08:28:07 UTC
an exotic almost-cacophony that curled in the shell of Orlando's ear

take all his skill to draw the perfect melody from Viggo's body

bristling with the juice of life

Maybe his fantasy-self begged them, maybe he pleaded, maybe he ordered and argued and insisted. Maybe he spread himself wide, or pressed deep and firmly in; a different feat, a different debauched deviation driving every desire

what a great idea, and you pulled it of so well. this is a tribute to viggo; it's sensual but not salacious. really well done; i enjoyed this a lot.

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wanderlost January 4 2009, 19:36:05 UTC
What a wonderful story. I feel in love with Viggo all over again.

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