Title: Palm to Palm
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ipso__factoAuthor:
eff_realityPairing: Billy/Orlando; Billy/Dom; Billy/Dom/Orlando
Rating: PG-13
Pre-reveal Notes: FYI, Orlando's "I resemble that remark!" is intentional. See
Urban Dictionary for an explanation.
Post-reveal Notes: My first born will be named after the lovely and the talented Beta of Love,
sandelwood.
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And then Dom kissed Billy--well, more like pushed Billy into the couch cushions with his mouth.
Dom's lithe and sensual and boyish and just as responsive as Billy expected him to be. He's hilarious and modest and has fucking gorgeous eyes.
Dom could find a way to turn on wallpaper.
I love the way you describe Dom *g*.
This is fantastic. ♥
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I love the way you describe Dom
Oh, I'm so glad. I was concerned about how he'd come off in this. Even though he's really the third wheel (or at least, he will be), I still wanted him to have presence and weight. He's sort of in control of the situation more than he should be. Damn that sexual prowess. :)
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I love how this is angst without being sentimental or taking itself too seriously.
Oh, thank you. This is what I'm always going for.
And I love how, as selfish as they all are, they're all still, in their own ways, willing to give something to each other.
Until you said this, I couldn't really articulate what I was going for with it. Thank you!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, as I'm a great admirer of your stuff.
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Dom's gravelly voice throws a sharp spike into the quiet
Billy sees that little sliver of truth showing between his teeth
Billy is instantly at the side of the bed, taking it up and making his own hand tell it I'm not going anywhere
and the last line.... wow, i adore this. it's so balanced; it's a serious piece that doesn't take itself too seriously. thank you so much.
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Thank you so much. Just what I was going for, and I'm glad it didn't come off as biased. :)
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