For escribo: All I Want to be is the Minute that You Hold Me in

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Title: All I Want to be is the Minute that You Hold Me in
Recipient: escribo (Dani)
Author: ipso__facto
Pairing: Hannah/Elijah/Dom
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "You and me, Hannah," he had said as he curled around her that night. "We'll do it together, ok? Wherever it is, we go together."
Pre-reveal Notes: Warnings for incest, and underage sex (15 years old). For Dani: I

Comments

[lisabellex]

Wow. That was stunning. What a gorgeous surprise - I wasn't expecting to see this pairing here. You caught me up and swept me away and now I'm longing for more.

Bravo!

:)

[ipso__facto]

Thank you, sweetie! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! It was a joy to write, really, once the story worked itself out. :)

[juke_box_dive]

Thank you so much! It's really quite gorgeous, just beautifully done. I love that there is more to the story than just sex--that Hannah is wonderfully sketched and becomes an actual person rather than just a foil for Elijah. There's both a maturity and a lack of maturity to her, if that makes sense, which really works towards making her three dimensional. I wasn't expecting this at all--I wasn't even expecting someone to actually write the pairing--and then to have it so well done. Also! I'm a little in love with this Dom. Thank you.

[almostnever]

This chatty, charming Dominic makes an excellent buffer between the fraught match, and it seems fitting that Elijah's so absent for most of the story.

[unstealthy]

I really love this. Beautifully written, makes me want much more of this pairing/threesome!

[kiltsandlollies]

This was such a fantastic surprise to read. So many great turns of languages, and it was soft but not too soft; you gave Hannah such personality, with a sweetness that doesn't cloy but also a toughness that doesn't feel wrong or forced. And your chatty, chirpy Dom is great fun. I'll enjoy this several times more, I think. Really excellent work.