For dizzydame: It's Not Christmas . . .

Dec 31, 2008 14:20

Title: It's Not Christmas . . .
Recipient: dizzydame
Author: dylan_dufresne
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Rating: PG-14
Summary: Request was for hurt/comfort with a happy ending, no girlfriends. I hope you like it.

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Comments 17

owlgrey January 1 2009, 08:57:05 UTC
The progression of this is just perfect.

I love their trailer Christmas efforts!

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:04:22 UTC
Hee! Thanks so much.

Pleased that you enjoyed. :)

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dizzydame January 2 2009, 18:58:45 UTC
Ooh those boys. This is perfect - angsty and lovely and exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you so much!

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:05:48 UTC
Yay! :::dances::: Mission accomplished.

I'm so very happy that you liked it.

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shegollum January 2 2009, 19:01:56 UTC
"Giving the younger man a fond look, Billy reaches up and taps Dom's temple.

"I can hear you thinking."" ==> so cute but so right for your characters as well.

"Let me help." ==> Seems so simple, doesn't it? I looooove that you included this just as what it is.

Last line is so lovely. Thank you for this.

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:07:40 UTC
Awww, thank you.

I think the last line was the easiest to write. It felt like home.

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cordeilla33 January 3 2009, 02:29:26 UTC
Awwwww...Dom is just too cute, as always. Your writing was very realistic of the boys and I loved the ending, to a great piece. I liked how you showed the progression of their closeness between them in such a few situations, but still it was enough to show how much they care and love one another. Thanks for writing!

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cordeilla33 January 7 2009, 05:26:45 UTC
Hee I had a feeling this was yours!

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:09:43 UTC
Hee! You know me too well. :)

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:09:20 UTC
With the ups and downs of life, near and far, they're always Billy n Dom. A bond between them that only gets stronger with time.

Thank you. :)

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dylan_dufresne January 10 2009, 05:10:09 UTC
:::blushes::: Thanks so much.

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