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Oct 16, 2011 16:44


█ ✫ INSIDE OUT ··· ( ch 6 of ? )
█ pairing: jongkey, minkey
█ rating: PG (NC-17 Over-all)
█ genre: drama - romance

✫ ··· chapter index
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five

✫ ··· author's note:
This chapter took a lot longer to come out than I was intending. School has been pretty demanding lately, and is only going to get busier as ( Read more... )

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slapstickhero October 16 2011, 20:48:55 UTC
█ ✫ spot for lovestrucksmile

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slapstickhero October 16 2011, 20:49:05 UTC
█ ✫ spot for rudyard

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rudyard October 17 2011, 19:33:29 UTC
If this isn't perfection at its finest then I really don't know what this was. The way you conveyed the emotions and how you painted such a vivided picture with each scene. My favorite scene would have to be when kibum was crying into Minho.

Minho is such a trooper. I just want to love him till the sun goes down. And for jonghyun, he needs some love but tough love. I want to know how things will be settled between the two. As much as I adore and I really wan Minho to be with Kibum, I still have a piece of a jongkey supporter in my heart. Haha.

Taemin is wise. Behind his babyish image sometimes and how people baby him, he is really smart! I wonder how leader dubu is doing ;;

Ahh my sweet noona, you are forever graceful with your writing! I adore you, much praises and so on!

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slapstickhero October 19 2011, 21:45:34 UTC
asdfghjkl Caibb why do you say such nice things to meeeeeee ; ___ ;

Minho may be a trooper, but not even the best soldier is anything more than human. And yes, I am alluding to a little something from the next chapter because I can. C:

<3

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slapstickhero October 16 2011, 20:49:19 UTC
█ ✫ spot for patzmelody01

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patzmelody01 October 23 2011, 19:52:01 UTC
Get ready for a long assed comment tomorrow.

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fantasydesire October 16 2011, 22:05:08 UTC
you updated!!! yeay!! *throws confettis and fireworks*

oh God.. this is so sad.. will they ever feel better?
especially minho..
TT________________TT

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slapstickhero October 19 2011, 21:46:35 UTC
Eventually, yes, things will get better.

Maybe.

For some.

Perhaps.

:D

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bmot October 17 2011, 04:03:21 UTC
I just found this series last week and read it all in one sitting (because it is that awesome/engaging) and then today I see that you updated, yessss.

I am so mad at Jonghyun for his general stupidity and his stupid rose (Key painting it was such a perfect response). I am just like seriously dude back off because minkey is happening now and it is beautiful. You jerkface. >:|

Taemin was so sweet here. How Key tried to censor what he did with Jonghyun even though Taemin is so obviously more mature now, and how you showed that he was with how he took care of Key. I loved how you wrote all of it, it was beautiful and so well developed. And then Minkey developing, I can't even begin to describe how perfect and romantic it is even through the angst.

This is all the babbling/coherence I can manage for your wonderful fic, I apologize. I am following it so hard and loving every second. Take your time, it's coming out beautifully. <3

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slapstickhero October 19 2011, 21:50:01 UTC
kjdfgjdfg All at once!? > 3< *Immensely flattered*

Jonghyun takes all the shit-flinging so far in this fic, but he does have his reasons for acting the way he does. They're not particularly good reasons, or very logical, but... I shan't say anything more. Trollololol~

Thanks so much for reading! ; ^ ;~~~

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