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[slapstickhero]

█ ✫ INSTINCT ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: 2min
█ rating: NC-17 (WARNING: Adult Content)
█ genre: PWP, Smut

█ summary:
Minho had somehow always known that Taemin was different when he was dancing. Now, however, he was absolutely certain of it.

✫ ··· author's note:
This fic is a monster. I was intending around 4-5k words, but I doubled my target. I couldn't

Comments

[lovestrucksmile]

omg. even though i had seen this in bits and pieces, all together it is a master piece and idek what to say because it left me completely speechless. ;~; i guess i'll just bullet point my comment because i'm honestly at a lack of words.

* the set up is amazing and i would tear shit up at aandrift. ♥

* demanding a side story for what happened with key and that guy and my favorite line in this whole thing (okay maybe not really but) is of course: Looking over his shoulder, he shouted something that Minho couldn't hear with a giddy glint to his eyes, and he prayed he had read his words incorrectly as the two of them disappeared: “I don't even know his name!”

Deciding Key was old enough to... Never mind, he didn't even want to know. key would so do that. he so would.

* um basically you stuffed every single thing i could want on taemin, from the boots, to the black hair, to the blue rings, on him and i love you for that and i know you did it on purpose to make my mind into mush okay and it worked. D:

* i love the sex scene so much. not really because it's a sex scene but more because it was the perfect mix of get-it-on-in-the-club and taemin's-first-time. and when you were describing minho's muscles shifting. nnngggghhhh. so vivid that i saw it in my mind like an hd movie. *_______*

* ;________________________; after the sex it's just so cute and i don't even know why but the lacing of the fingers just got me and i was breaking out the tissues like - MY BABY IS A MAN NOW. and i love how tender minho is while still managing to remain sexy and manly and hsjnfghsadfgjfg.

* oh key. lol. i know he'll draw the story out of taemin later. x) but i loved how their hands are still intertwined at the end and taemin's all dozing on minho's shoulder and sob. T_T just the right amount of fluff imo.

so basically you're amazing and i worship you. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

[slapstickhero]

Yeah, you know all that descriptive flexing was your you. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

I will continue to consider your side story request. I sort of even have a scenario in mind for it. I have other things to finish first, though! xD

❤❤