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[slappersonly]

Title: The hate that it brings.
Summary: Though he'll never say it, Jim doesn't like sharing.
Rating: 18
Genre: Complete, unapologetic PWP. AGAIN, SORRY.
Warnings: Contains Jim Moriarty? Slight manipulation I guess, dysfunctional friendships, etc etc.
Wordcount: 1751

Comments

[the_randomist]

WHY ARE YOU APOLOGISING? STOP APOLOGISING, JFC, THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL AND I ADORE YOU.

SO HOT.

[slappersonly]

asdfghjkl thank you. <3

[the_randomist]

I'm reccing this and linking it around, btw, hope you don't mind. ♥

[slappersonly]

Not at all! That is very flattering, thank you.

[sebmoran]

I will try to make this a proper review, since I have been pestering you about it for days and it's only fair that you get something back~

I really love this. Thank you. No, seriously - thank you for endlessly discussing Jim/Seb with me and sharing some/most of my kinks, for Getting it and for constantly writing me porn and feeding my sick habit stuff.

I think the characterisation is really good, and I like the fact that even though Jim is apparently pliant, he still has a hidden agenda, which is something that you absolutely know he would do. And the fact that he's jealous of the fact that other people get to play with his favourite toy! Of course he would be, because he's a selfish bastard (and a manipulative cunt). Also, you needn't have worried about not getting Sebastian right. I think you did him really well. I love that you made him both unwilling to, you know, let his guard down and play along with what Jim's trying to do, but at the same time really fucking wanting it. It's still a power struggle between them, however,

[slappersonly]

Thank you! <3

I am always here to tinhat, you know this.

I am gash at replying to reviews but I am REALLY GLAD you liked this, and I had a lorra lorra fun writing it.

YOU CAN TOTALLY WRITE SOMETHING BETTER, FYI.

<3

[blacktofade]

I love the dialogue in this like burning. Also the line, It's like befriending a tiger, this wild creature that could kill him if the mood struck because everything about it is perfect. I should also mention how fantastically HOT the porn is. NGL, one-sided, manipulative relationships hold a special place in my heart and pants ♥

[slappersonly]

Thank you so much for even reading this, you! I know you pretty much hated the source material, so thanks! NGL, dysfunctional, manipulative bastards are my favourite! <3

[slappersonly]

YOU ARE FAR TOO KIND, TY TY! <3

It makes me laugh too. Either way you look at it, they were either toasting this or Jim being permitted to touch Sally in dirty ways. BEST TOAST EVER. It's nice to have the gang behind me in these matters. (Not like that.)

[aforanthea]

I gladly take full blame for this! UNF! LOVE IT!

Not!Ruby

[slappersonly]

I am shaking my fist at you, missy!

(Except not, because I had a lot of fun writing it.)

Thanks!