Comments | skyvehicle: SURFACING -- House/Wilson

skyvehicle

SURFACING -- House/Wilson

Oct 20, 2006 14:21

TITLE: Surfacing
PAIRING: House/Wilson friendship. Non-slash.
RATING: PG
SUMMERY: House wakes from the coma, and Wilson keeps him company. Sometimes, you just have to realize what you need. Post 'No Reason.'
WARNING: Spoilers for the season 2 finale, NO REASON.
DISCLAIMER: It's not mine, at all.

( SURFACING )

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Question? diagnosticmad October 20 2006, 21:38:36 UTC

Didn't Cameron say in the episode "Meaning" 301 that the shooter got away and was never heard from again? Let me know since Wilson saying he shot himself didn't make a whole lot of sense. I could be remembering wrong though.

Re: Question? skyvehicle October 20 2006, 21:44:56 UTC

Good point. I don't even remember. Let me check that out. Thanks for pointing that out.

Or maybe Cameron was just saying that to cover up that instincts make her stupid? Oh the possibilities. Because, you know, everybody lies. ;p

Re: Question? skyvehicle October 20 2006, 21:47:47 UTC

Ah, you're right! Completely forgot about that, thanks. Fixing it now.

Re: Question? diagnosticmad October 20 2006, 21:53:08 UTC

I'm glad I caught it. I'm nice about such things. Others might be meaner...though it is a fan fic...so you can have your fun. Otherwise, like the piece, keep it up. I've been thinking about writing a scene after No Reason too. Good work!

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bankingonamyth October 21 2006, 04:47:07 UTC

aahhhh. i like this a lot. i love these sorts of fics. if it becomes more than a one-shot i'll definitely keep reading :D. very nicely written, great job!

skyvehicle October 21 2006, 17:43:59 UTC

Thanks. I think that's going to stay a one shot. But I definitely plan on writing more fics.

maineac October 23 2006, 22:14:32 UTC

this captures the foggy just-waking-up feeling very well, and the House Wilson friendship.thanks for writing it.

Small note: You might want to work on your verb tenses--not switching back and forth from past to present in the same sentence. it can be confusing to read.

skyvehicle October 23 2006, 22:34:47 UTC

Thank you for pointing that out. Because verb tenses will be the deat of me. Sometimes I'll just be like 'OOH this sentance just HAS to be in the present,' and then a few paragraphs later, I'm sad because this other sentance will look better in the past.' Well, not really sad. Just... conflicted.

Sorry for the confusion!