My first HSJ prompt/fanfiction

Sep 29, 2008 22:37


Title: Fighting doesn't always solve everything a.k.a. Prompt #136. 5 times Ryutaro had a fight with Shintaro
Author: skytears9 (me!)
Pairing: Um, none really, but I tried to slip in Chitaro.
Words: 1942
Genre: Brother Angst, Humor, and some Romance/Fluffiness
Rating: G
Summary: The Morimoto brothers were famous for their numerous feuds, but these fights ( Read more... )

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chibilover14 September 30 2008, 19:16:03 UTC
OMFG. I'M SORRY FOR SUCH A LATE REPLY AND COMMENT TO THAT OTHER COMMENT. I WOULD'VE SO SUPPORTED YOU ON WRITING FROM THE HSJ-THON/!!! *FLAILS AT YOU* I'M SO PROUD OF YOU!!! *HUGS YOU TIGHTLY* AND ANI WILL DEFINITELY BE HAPPY ONCE SHE SEES THIS. XDDD
AWESOME JOB AND I LOVED THE FIC! XDDD
OMG... YOU DEFINITELY SLIPPED IN CHIITARO. WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? THAT'S TOTALLY YOUR PAIRING THERE. XDDD
*shakes head at their fights* XDDD But cuuute!
WAAAAH!!! RYUTARO GETTING JEALOUS ISH JUST ADORABLE!!! *FLAILS* AND HE FINALLY CONFESSED!!! *FLAILS AGAIN* CHIITARO WAS CUUUTE!!!! XDDD YOU ARE GOOD! YOU HAVE TALENT! EVERYONE DOES! XDDD *HUGS YOU TIGHTLY*
And who were taking those piccys? XDDD

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skytears9 October 2 2008, 06:43:32 UTC
IT'S REALLY A-OK ABOUT YOUR LATE COMMENT. Awwwww, THANKS SO MUCH!! I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT AND I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT!! It put a BIG SMILE on my face :D *BIG BEAR HUG BACK*
But I don't think it's that good because I'm a complete newbie at this and I kept freaking out about the plot. o.O And I feel like I made Ryutaro a somewhat angry child, because he was either frustrated or jealous 5 times in my fic. x]
And OMG about the HSJ-thon, there were SO MANY TO CHOOSE FROM! It took me a longggggg while to finally choose one. hahaha
About Chiitaro being the OTP, at first I was thinking about slipping it in a little, but then as I kept writing, I expanded more on them. I just couldn't help myself XDD *FLAILS WITH YOU*
It's probably the rest of HSJ taking pictures of them. and ready to post them on someone's j-web BWAHAHA.

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anilee0510 October 1 2008, 03:02:12 UTC
JFIOSAJFWAEIRHEWIRFAIHFESHFIFCJSDFJOIWAEJROJWEIORJWARNOWJSLFJAFJ
NBEGWAOIETHIOFDSJOIAFJOAWJFOEWAJFWPEOAJFPOWAJFJHAFWIFHEIOWJRFPO
WANFGMSJFKWAJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*dies from all the Chiitaro love*

THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE AND ADORABLE!!! OMG!!!!! JEALOUS RYUTARO IS JUST WIN!!!!!!! ESPECIALLY WHEN IT'S OVER SHINTARO!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

THAT WAS JUST SO CUTE!!!!! I WOULD TOTALLY QUOTE THIS WHOLE THING!!!!!

BWAHAHAHAAHHA!!!!!! MORIMOTO BROTHERS FIGHTING!!!! TOO HILARIOUS!!!! XDDDDDDDDDD THIS IS TOTALLY GETTING PRINTED OUT!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! *glomptackles you*

THIS IS ABSOLUTE LOVE!!!!!!!!! <33333333333333

AND CHIITARO WAS NOT JUST 'SLIPPED' IN!! IT WAS TOTALLY THE OTP HERE!!!!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! *flails and flaps and goes incoherent screaming* REREADING TIME!!!!!!!

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skytears9 October 2 2008, 07:01:30 UTC
*goes incoherent with you because it's fun* OSDFJKSFKNFLSDKFJILOVEHIKARUSDLKFJLFLKJDF!!! FSOISFJKSFOIKAT-TUNROCKSFLSFKJ!

NO--don't die! XDD haha

Awww, THANKS A LOT! I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT AND THAT MY FIC WAS ABLE TO FULFILL YOUR CHIITARO LOVE!! But it's not that good because I'm a complete newb when it comes to fic writing and I'm still learning. x]

*allows herself to get glomptacked* ROFL. It's great that you find it funny, because I had a lot of fun writing them! I just thought of the countless fighs with my own annoying little brother. He actually came in handy for once. BWAHAHA. *thanks younger brother with a light smack on the head*

Yeah, at first I didn't know which prompt to choose from and I was only thinking of writing a small part about a jealous Ryutaro. But as I kept writing, I just couldn't help myself and ended up putting in Ryutaro's confession. XDDD

NOOO--please don't print it!! It's not worth the ink or re-read!! XD

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anilee0510 October 4 2008, 05:22:32 UTC
*goes incoherent some more because she just likes to* HFOSDFIOWA HFIEWAHFEWFAHFEHFIAWIFJEFJIWAFIEFWANFENFIAWNFNWFNEIOFNAWOINFEJSDK
FJOAJFOEIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*comes back to life* BONG! <--spring sound

OF COURSE!!!!!! ANYTHING CHIITARO IS GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME!!!!! AS LONG AS IF IT'S NOT SMUT, I'LL LOVE ANY CHIITARO!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!?!?!? YOU WRITE AWESOME FICS!!!!! ARE YOU TALKING TO JEN?!?!?!

XDDDD My laughin point is...quite low actually. As long as you have something humorous or witty to say, I'll laugh and think it's funny/amusing. XDDDDDD GREAT JOB ANNOYING LITTLE BROTHER!!! *gives brother a thumbs up and pat on the back*

XDDDDDDDD I'm glad you kept writing. KYAAAAAAAH!!!!!! THE CONFESSION WAS JUST FJDOAFJISADHFIOANFIOSADJFISAHFHDSIFHSO!!!!

TOO LATE!!!!! LOL, I have like...22 pages front-back of Chiitaro fics in size 10 font and the margins set to 0.5 XDDDD

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maxxiply November 23 2008, 21:48:35 UTC
Ahhh~

This just makes me want to have Ryutaro as my little brother even more~ *placing hands on my cheeks and shaking my head* I-If I had Ryutaro as my younger brother I'd want to... *blabs on and on*

This is good! 8D You have nothing to worry about! *thumbs-up* I see Chiitaro! Ani would be happy and flailing a lot! *squints* Hanya? Is that Hikato? The one with Keito going to call for a goofy BEST member. X3 Aaaaaaiiinngggg~ *somehow hyper*

Sorry for reading this one. I'll read the rest after my project is done! :D

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skytears9 November 25 2008, 00:25:12 UTC
I know, right? Well, I would rather have the Morimoto kyoudai than my little brother. x] LOL. I think a lot of people would want him as a little brother.

Aw, really? Thanks a bunch for reading and I'm glad you like it! YES, the Chiitaro can be seen! XD YATTA, you could also see the Hikato. It's one my OTP, so I just HAD to slip it in. ;] *gets hyper thinking about Hikato*

Okey dokey!

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