[Flashfic] Being Anko

[skylar_inari]

Title: Being Anko
Author: skylar-inari
Requester: oceanica
Pairing/Characters: Anko/Orochimaru
Genres: Flashback/missing moment hybrid.
Summary: He helped make her, but what he’d made her wasn’t all she was.
Notes: Written for the September Round of naruto_flashfic.

Comments

[oceanica]

Oooh, that was really great!

I loved how you worked through that mix of loyalty and revulsion -- I could really get the sense of her deep-down knowing that stuff was wrong but just... not speaking up about it.

Thank you!

[skylar_inari]

You're welcome! I'm so glad that you like it!

[rushin_doll]

As always: yay! (Also, re: that chapter you sent me. Where's the rest? I demands!) That said! Nitpicky details!

But the blank staring eyes of the others that had been with her made him want to hate him.

I think you've got some pronoun confusion here. I knew what you meant, but you might want to take another look?

Hugs,
Ana

[skylar_inari]

Heeeee. (It's not written yet! Though the 'plan' is to have chapter two done by Sunday! So you might get it then! Unless I fail and don't finish writing it. Yes.)

*squints* Yeaaaaah, thanks for pointing that out zomg. *facepalms* *goes to poke at it*