A Grammatically Correct Romantic Contrivance

[skyisacanvas]

She unshook and shine and shook and shushed my busy worded mind.  Paragraphs of blonde bright wheat and pretty feet in the insouciance of neverminds, hooray and how are you, I am never minding myself never, no, not yet, fine, thanks for asking and yourself.  ?  Have me in novella shapes because no novels are read for the casual cause of causerie.

Comments

[spiffysheep20]

'allo, i haven't dropped you a line in a while so i figure now is a good as time as any. i never finished reading the lines of causerie, or at least the parts you sent me, i was totally hooked for a few days then stopped reading for a few and now i dont remember where it is on my computer and forgot how much i like your writing to look.
i did however read this short peice which i liked. esp "Sure enough, sure, someday we'll make beautiful sense, beautiful nonsense, or something, somehow." because it's true something will be made someday somehow but the way you write it makes it seem not as vauge as it is and oh so romantic. i also just like how the whole peice flows. it almost seems like a poem because of the good beat. i also liked the line "liquor pink lips" because it makes me think of girly pink drinks and being drunk and being drunk on love (and being uninhibited and dancing and stumbling and twirling around and all those other nice things associated with being drunk or in love).
anywho, thanks for the inspiration. i hope your day is wonderful as it is a wonderful day.

[skyisacanvas]

That's exactly the image I wanted for liquor pink lips. Glad it worked.
Good to hear from you. You're always such an encouragement!
Hope everything's well for you, drop me an email sometime.