Carapace Sails

[skyisacanvas]

There is, here, a dwelling scene taking place right where I'm short of breath on the hospital bed. I will remember this forever, though that's probably not saying much, depending on where I go from here

Comments

[ledumb]

the prose is very effective (affective?).
i thought of dan today.

[skyisacanvas]

Thanks. I don't think I like it, though. Feels like a lot of work for nothing.
Why?

[ledumb]

i do.
because i thought of my uncle. and the train of thought somehow ended at yours.

wow.

[anonymous]

eric payne this is wow. i don't know how else to say it, i thought i could say i have read the best thing you have ever wrote but now i don't know. you never stop amazing me with your wonderful talent. i love how you make wonderful stories that i can wrap around me like a favorite sweater. and how i can almost taste your words. this was beautiful.

Leah

Re: wow.

[skyisnotacanvas]

Thanks Leah!

[dganin]

"after decades of cigarette smoking instead of lovemaking caught up with me" - interesting image. Cool poem.. I was so out of my mind in March, though.

[skyisacanvas]

Thanks. And you've come back to your mind since March, I hope?

[dganin]

nope.

[skyisacanvas]

Haha.