The Fine Line (3rd Down)

May 31, 2009 13:54

A/N: Don't have a lot to say hehehe. So just enjoy.

The Fine Line

Third Down: The Danger of Knowing

"Who are we meeting again?" Mamori asked as they entered Devie's. Hiruma had been rather quiet.
"Somebody who's a fucking expert on this." He answered while his eyes darted across the resturant. "There the fuck she is."
She followed his line of vision. A ( Read more... )

hirumamo, the fine line, fanfic

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lampazo_libre May 31 2009, 17:21:58 UTC
Oh, so the plot thickens... maaaassively.
Well, Mamori, you've certainly got yourself into a whole different kind of torture.
"Is there a fucking manual we can buy somewhere?" AWESOME
Sena and Suzuna's cameo were priceless.
Megumi <3 . I wish i could draw.
Liked it. Keep waiting for more!

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skyfang May 31 2009, 17:29:56 UTC
oh I wish i coud draw too. whehehe. But icould describe her to you if you want.

thanks for commenting. I love your militarilization by the way.

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lampazo_libre May 31 2009, 17:41:35 UTC
I sure want you to!
oh, that's nothing, really - i believe that every author needs some feedback, and when I read a story I certainly have some thoughts in process, so why not to share?
Thanks for complimenting militarization!

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skyfang May 31 2009, 17:47:20 UTC
well, she's 21 years old and is a psychologist. She a bit shorter than Hiruma , around 5'5. She looks like him but has softer features. She also has her own networks and connections.

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lampazo_libre May 31 2009, 17:50:33 UTC
Oh, sankyou!

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