Challenge CK 08 - Ephemera
Title : Obey Her
Wordcount: 300ish
I figured I'd go for the triple whammy, and try a POV character, a pairing, and a subject all outside my comfort zone. Possibly a mistake, as I don't think this Kevin is particularly Kevin-like, so as a Characterisation exercise - fail for me. Having settled on a prompt to answer, I didn't want to write Kevin being master to a female slave, nor the more obvious Pet!Nick Master!Kevin, so ended up with a pair of slave-boys, and - yeah. Not convincing to me, so I doubt it convinces a reader.
Wordcount: 300ish
I figured I'd go for the triple whammy, and try a POV character, a pairing, and a subject all outside my comfort zone. Possibly a mistake, as I don't think this Kevin is particularly Kevin-like, so as a Characterisation exercise - fail for me. Having settled on a prompt to answer, I didn't want to write Kevin being master to a female slave, nor the more obvious Pet!Nick Master!Kevin, so ended up with a pair of slave-boys, and - yeah. Not convincing to me, so I doubt it convinces a reader.