Well, sometimes I think Jim deserves to be traumatized for the snarky shit he says, or at the very least punched, maybe in the face or maybe in the balls. But this time he gets a pass from ball-punching for being a good sport at the end.
The best part of this overall, to me, is the little bit after they get out of the rover. It just portrays a very... nice (I don't like that word, but it's true) friendship and affection that I think we (writers and readers) take for granted a lot of the time.
Though it's a fill for a Sin prompt, I don't find it sinful at all (though certainly not saintly >:); just sweet.
Snarky Wash, persistant Taylor, troll!Jim! The build up was fun and cute, and the sex was...whew. Am not sorry you had to work with the Rover size instead of the Rhino, because the closed quarters and intimate position were very hot.
“Don’t grind your gears,” she rolls her eyes, “And remember not to clutch the stick so tightly.” That one does earn him a bemused brow raise from the Commander.
Jim is terrible in the most entertaining way.
So...next time on the hood of the Rover, right? :D
I enjoyed everything about the fic and "To no one's surprise, Shannon is behind her almost immediately,..." made me laugh. LOL! I pictured him sliding over and not even walking. hehehehehheheeeee
When they were getting hot in the Rover, I pictured Mira out there somewhere with a cam tipping it sideways going, "Hey Carter look what I found." heheheheee
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The best part of this overall, to me, is the little bit after they get out of the rover. It just portrays a very... nice (I don't like that word, but it's true) friendship and affection that I think we (writers and readers) take for granted a lot of the time.
Though it's a fill for a Sin prompt, I don't find it sinful at all (though certainly not saintly >:); just sweet.
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Awww, thank you! I couldn't bring myself to make it terribly aggressive this time around. Just fun and light midday fun for the two of them. xD
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Snarky Wash, persistant Taylor, troll!Jim! The build up was fun and cute, and the sex was...whew. Am not sorry you had to work with the Rover size instead of the Rhino, because the closed quarters and intimate position were very hot.
“Don’t grind your gears,” she rolls her eyes, “And remember not to clutch the stick so tightly.” That one does earn him a bemused brow raise from the Commander.
Jim is terrible in the most entertaining way.
So...next time on the hood of the Rover, right? :D
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I won't lie. Perhaps my favorite thing to do in this chapter was somehow come up gratuitous vehicle themed innuendo for Jim. xD
Oh, undoubtedly. Just for you. Hood of the Rover.
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*SQUEEE*
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“And remember not to clutch the stick so tightly.” THIS MADE ME LOSE IT. AT WORK. GOT THE STRANGEST LOOKS FROM THE OFFICE MANAGER. ALL YOUR FAULT.
The sexual trolling from both of them was brilliant. So perfectly character appropriate. They would so do this.
We need to petition HBO to buy Terra Nova so we can SEE IT (HBO would bring back Wash, they love that sort of thing).
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Ah, sexual trolling. One of my fav things.
...This. This is an idea. You and your IDEAS! I LOVE THEM SO!
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<3
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When they were getting hot in the Rover, I pictured Mira out there somewhere with a cam tipping it sideways going, "Hey Carter look what I found." heheheheee
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