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sky_dark

Better Living Through Alchemy - Chapter 20, Part One

Jul 10, 2006 18:54

Title: Better Living Through Alchemy - Chapter 20, Part One
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
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( Vacation, Meant to be spent alone )

Comments 31

albel July 10 2006, 23:24:45 UTC

1st comment? xD

albel July 11 2006, 00:08:34 UTC

Okay, comments on part 1:

They got engadged fast. It almost seemed kind of rushed at first, especially so soon in the chapter, but after the whole chapter I didn't mind at all~ It actually made me really giddy because yay! Mr. Edward Elric-Mustang? It has a nice ring to it 8D

And wow, the ending of the first part was so perfect xD

"I just have this overwhelming need to have sex with you" Brilliance.

Okay! -dances onto the next part-

sky_dark July 11 2006, 22:03:35 UTC

...fast? They've been together (with hiatus) since Ed was 15 XD How is that fast? I appreciate the comment, thanks for reading!

albel July 11 2006, 22:06:28 UTC

Nononono, that's not what I meant xD I mean so fast into the chapter ^^; Of course it's not fast in the lines of the actual story 8D; I was actually surprised they didn't get engadged earlier. Haha.

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solemnly_swear1 January 17 2007, 10:10:42 UTC

Your icon just killed me :D

keelain July 10 2006, 23:37:03 UTC

YES!!

*made my day after something that had to do w/ me + writing ruined it... partly...*

*goes off to read*

ipitydaf00l July 10 2006, 23:46:23 UTC

*curses the fact that now she has to go over to Kendra's to play Handywoman and Fish-disposer*

However, I really enjoyed what I did get a chance to read! XD

And the description of Roy's outfit for going to the lake made me snicker.

vanilla_scream July 11 2006, 00:41:14 UTC

Go Sky-Sama, u rulz