From The Inside (2/2)

Aug 26, 2009 19:30

Title: From The Inside (2/2)
Pairing: Leeteuk/Kangin
Prompt: From The Inside - Linkin Park (Drabble #7)
Rated PG-13 (Swearing, mentions of...stuff)
A/N: This is based on a drabble I did for a challenge found Here
Summary: Trying not to break but I'm so tired of this deceit every time I try to make myself get back up on my feet all I ever think about is ( Read more... )

pairing: leeteuk/kangin, two shot, playlist challenge, !superjunior, rating: pg-13

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amasakireyoko September 30 2009, 10:38:05 UTC
Yes, it was great. Yes, it took a long time. And YES I wanted to KICK YOUR ASS for making me wait so long! XD You have ANY idea how many times a day I would check back on this to see if you’ve updated? ^__^ I’m glad you finally did.

Honestly, I have to say that style wise it’s nothing special and there’s not even a single scene in this story. But… I’m still smiling and I LOVE how you didn’t use the ‘illness’ factor for your story. I was dead afraid that as I kept reading you would write that Kangin had cancer or something. Totally clique. But this… even though it’s damn hard for me to see KANGIN being raped… I like that he did it for his members. I just… kinda wished the ending was a LITTLE bit longer. Something… more. But it was good as it was and I’d love to thank your friend very, very much for making you finish this. ^___^ I myself was looking for inspiration to finish off my own KangTeuk story and I think… now I can. X3 Just doubt that anyone would read it. Ahaha~~~

Anyways, nicely written. Can’t wait for your next story (whenever it may be).

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skutner613 October 18 2009, 07:48:19 UTC
(I'm sorry for the wait, and I know that my writing isn't exactly something to write home about :/)

but regardless I'm glad you were still able to enjoy it

I'm actually thinking of writing a middle-verse because I really didn't like just ending it like that either. Your thoughts?

[And I would totally read your story, pass the love right back ;D]

Thanks so much for reading~!♥

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amasakireyoko November 17 2009, 22:29:16 UTC
A middle verse huh? Can't seem to think of anything other than it has some sort of connect with HanChul. o.O I dunno why but EVERYTIME I read or wanna write bout KangTeuk OR HanChul they've got to be in the story TOGETHER. It seems... only natural (if that even makes sense). Have you come up with anything so far? I think it'd be nice to use the comment that the bastard that 'sold' Kangin (the one he said about Heechul'll make a great catch cuz of his beautiful looks) and elaborate it more? Who knows? I dunno why, but me love protective, silently possessive Hannie. Soo... kekeke. That's all I can hint. XP

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