Feels Like An Overdose
Title: Feels Like An Overdose
Pairing: Hankyung/Heechul
Rated: R
Warnings: Drug Use, Sexual Situations
Summary: Steal the night, kill the lights, feel it under your skin. Keep it tight cause its pulling you in. Wrap it up, can't stop cause it feels like an overdose.
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Pairing: Hankyung/Heechul
Rated: R
Warnings: Drug Use, Sexual Situations
Summary: Steal the night, kill the lights, feel it under your skin. Keep it tight cause its pulling you in. Wrap it up, can't stop cause it feels like an overdose.
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I LOVE that you wrote one for me but... eventhough it's well written verse wise, I couldn't find the connection of these people to Heechul and Hankyung. I don't know. It could be a personal preference. I've always liked it when it's written in a way that we know the characters so well and the sex is secondary. A must, but only after the developement of the character's are established. This fic seems so vague. Like it could be any two people in the rave. It wouldn't neccessary be HanChul. Am I being clear enough? O3O
Then again, this is really good for a 2AM fic so THANK YOU! I'm just sorry I couldn't be more grateful and enjoy it more. But I feel what I feel and, as someone who does honestly enjoy your fics, I had to tell you the negatives about it. Don't take it too to heart kay? Maybe if I knew the song. Then maybe...
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I appreciate the honesty. It was meant to be really vague (and the fact that they're drugged up doesn't help the clarity, i know) It's just one of those things I wrote when my insomnia wasn't letting me sleep and the music was raving in my ears, ya know? So no worries about the criticism, i'm surprised someone hasn't just asked "why have you posted this crap?" XD Hanchul is just my bias so i stuck them in there out of wanting to write them -3-
I promise the next fic i dedicate to you will be coherent :DDD
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