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weslyn in skull_boy_love

Dead & Damned Part III

Apr 29, 2007 23:39

The THIRD part! Thanks for all the lovely feedback. This is my first time writing in Harry's POV and hopefully I do just as good with him as Bob.
Previous chapters: Part I, Part II

Chapter 3
TV!Harry POV
PGish because this one's kinda tame on the language and sexuality.
Disclaimer: Oh right, I don't own them. Tell that to my plot bunnies. What? You ( Read more... )

wip, crossover, user:weslyn, author:weslyn, rating:pg, fic:dead & damned, fic

Comments 32

luvmeanddespair April 30 2007, 04:04:27 UTC

“Holy mother of-!” I did an odd sort of dance, avoiding the strangely molten looking lines of whatever-the-fuck-symbol I had just hopelessly meandered onto. I burst out laughing like a lunatic while reading that... Poor Harry. *chokes on air again*

But awww, Bob! "Yes, but at least she can touch you.” *wibbles* And then he goes and flees! :(

Very good! Can't wait for the next bit! ^^

weslyn April 30 2007, 04:53:55 UTC

Ha ha, it was a very amusing mental video to watch.

There was sadly very little Bob in this one for me. He was sulking cause I didn't write it in his POV. I have the feeling there shall be much wibbling in the chapters to come. Hopefully, that's not a bad thing...

anonymous April 30 2007, 04:38:10 UTC

*Sniff* Poor Bob. Poor, silly, incorporeal Bob. And poor Harry. He never does quite get what's going on, does he?

weslyn April 30 2007, 04:55:43 UTC

It's not obvious... not yet. Kind of like in the show, they haven't realized how desperate they are for each other. YET.

metalkatt April 30 2007, 04:38:20 UTC

Poor both of them. *snugs main characers* Can hardly wait for more!

weslyn April 30 2007, 04:57:18 UTC

Snugs? Is that kinda like hug and snog at the same time? More...? Agh. The bunnies haven't decided whose POV I'm writing in next.

Thanks for commenting!

metalkatt April 30 2007, 04:58:47 UTC

Hadn't thought of that, but it's technically short for snuggle. But I can totally get behind the snog/hug thing, sure!

Let 'em nibble. They'll eat your brain and then tell you what to do. Just takes time. ^_~

spooks99 April 30 2007, 06:35:16 UTC

*shakes head* Bob, Bob. What are you thinking? you don't have to be lonely, Bob. You have me-er, Harry.

spooks99 April 30 2007, 06:39:37 UTC

Oh, and since my last bout of shameless begging apparently produced more fic...pleasepleaseplease give us more Harry and Bob!

weslyn April 30 2007, 08:22:08 UTC

Ha ha ha! Aww, you make me feel special. *heaves a sigh* I'm such a sucker... all right. You're lucky I happened to write a small drabble that my muse was prodding me about. Nothing much, I'm not even sure if it's Bob or Harry, but I liked a few of the lines I came up with. Might use them later...

Are you as restless as I?
I want to make your thighs tremble.
Do you lie awake at night because you see the same things I do when I close my eyes?
I want to make you to feel my need.
Do you reach out in your dreams to touch intangible things?
I want to lap up your sent.
Does the heat blossom low? Does it transform your thoughts of me? Is that why you pant, is that why you moan?
I want you to do terrible things to me.
Is it wrong if I call out your name when I'm so delirious with pleasure that I've forgotten my own?