I had a very busy week, and managed to miss 7 and 8, despite eagerly anticipating them. I am so happy happy happy to have 4 installments today! The story is building really nicely. I love that Harry's body recognizes who Robin is, even if he doesn't just yet.
Okay it's official I love this! Welll I did before as well but it is something that I can just keep saying as this just keeps getting better and better.
The scene played well and all the references to the books are shown clearly and fit brilliantly into the story you are creating. Just wonderful.
I love this series. (Well, you know that, but I felt that I should put what I think down on paper.)
I'm particularly delighted by the kiss. So often kisses in romance or erotica are ultra-sexy even before the relationship has progressed that far. This is sweet and tender and has just enough sensuality to draw the reader in.
Robin is delightful, and Harry is his own snarky self AND wonderfully clueless.
Finally, I love how you've been able to marry the books and the series so seamlessly.
I don't know that I'm really trying to put the series in there-- the series has what I consider kind of a 'cuter' aesthetic-- fairly tame villains beaten in one episode. Contrast with... say... Mavra, Lord Raith.
Although obviously *cough* Robin is a nod to it. It couldn't be anyone else.
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...and it was a perfect first kiss.
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The scene played well and all the references to the books are shown clearly and fit brilliantly into the story you are creating. Just wonderful.
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I'm particularly delighted by the kiss. So often kisses in romance or erotica are ultra-sexy even before the relationship has progressed that far. This is sweet and tender and has just enough sensuality to draw the reader in.
Robin is delightful, and Harry is his own snarky self AND wonderfully clueless.
Finally, I love how you've been able to marry the books and the series so seamlessly.
Excellent job.
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Although obviously *cough* Robin is a nod to it. It couldn't be anyone else.
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