Other: Poetic nausea

Sep 05, 2004 23:43

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neven September 6 2004, 23:54:39 UTC
i agree that
breaking an incomplete
sentence
up into multiple lines
does not a thing poetry

though rhymes are
not always necessary

poetry is marked by the
clever, creative and inspired
use of words and word structures

format alone is not poetry

unless it actually says something

..which
in most cases
it does not

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skreyola September 7 2004, 00:06:47 UTC
Well, marriage is not love but a commitment and vow, but some people don't seem to understand that, either.
:)
I agree completely with you. :)

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neven September 7 2004, 00:10:50 UTC
Yea, kinda like the difference between personal revulsion and hatred. This anti-discrimination thing has gone too far.

I see we're in the same boat on this. :)

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skreyola September 7 2004, 01:02:30 UTC
We are on most of the important issues, aren't we? :)

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neven September 7 2004, 19:43:44 UTC
I think so. :) I've had my head bashed in a few times by the good Lord and some good logic, so i think most of our disagreements are in the past.

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skreyola September 7 2004, 23:16:24 UTC
Isn't God great?!?! When He teaches us something, he often has to break us, but He usually puts us back together again when we give him all the pieces. And any time He breaks us, He makes us stronger afterward. :)

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neven September 8 2004, 00:00:46 UTC
He is awesome indeed! It took many lost battles for me to finally admit defeat. I took it upon myself to challenge the Almighty, if that is really who he was, and he prove himself mightily in my life. A lot of people warned me against my arrogance and audacity to challenge GOD, but i always said that if he is who he says he is, he can handle it-and he can take me down. And take me down he did. I am truly grateful to have been humbled by the Most High and shown who he really is. I will not forget how he has shown himself mighty on my behalf, the true sovereign creator, the one to whom i owe my very life.

Someone once told me i'm the kind of guy to pick a fight with GOD. I asked someone else what they thought and they said that it's better to fight GOD than to ignore him. I agree. Because he won and now i am forever changed, and greater in him than i ever tried to be.

I could go on forever, but i'll spare your email. :)

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skreyola September 8 2004, 00:14:42 UTC
:-D *huge grin*
Amen!

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neven September 8 2004, 02:24:40 UTC
:D

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