new Panic fic: Tear Down the Slaughter-house

Apr 05, 2008 14:57

Tear Down the Slaughter-house | PG-13 | ~7,000 words
Brendon/Spencer
Warnings: future fic, character death
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Brendon isn’t surprised when Haley opens the door for him, not really.

A/N: Huge, mammoth thanks go to chopsticknoodle for the awesome beta and encouragement. Title is a reference to Reuben Bright by EAR. I just sort of stumbled ( Read more... )

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sinuous_curve April 5 2008, 19:43:29 UTC
Oh man, so Marianna was talking to me as she was beta-ing this and she said it was brilliant, but it was totally breaking her heart and she was absolutely right.

This is heart wrenching and and hopeful at the same time and utterly lovely. :)

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:40:33 UTC
thank you so much! I'm always so wary about posting stuff like this, so I'm glad you liked it.

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elucreh April 5 2008, 19:44:14 UTC
You made me cry

But Jon the stepdad is still completely awesome.

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:40:54 UTC
oh, I'm sorry hon *hugs* I'm glad you liked this.

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prettykitty_aya April 5 2008, 19:56:22 UTC
man, you know i adore your regular stuff, it makes me grin and laugh and always, always brightens my day. but when you write like this, god, you break my heart, make me ache, and then still put me back together.

i love it, i love you and you made me cry.

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sceaterian April 5 2008, 22:14:59 UTC
Thank you for rec'ing this.

Skoosiepants, this was beautiful and heart wrenching.

This line, "because Ryan’s awesome and he knows-knew how to decorate," just broke me. The rest of the story too. They are so stubborn and proud and there are so many hints of things that you never fully expand on but shade the entire story. Just wonderfully written.

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:41:48 UTC
thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:41:15 UTC
thank you so much, hon *hugs*

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parcae April 5 2008, 20:08:50 UTC
Oh, oh, wow, this is. I don't even know what to say to this, but. Oh, oh. ♥.

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:42:01 UTC
thank you so much!

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highschoolhussy April 5 2008, 20:10:54 UTC
Oh my God. Oh my God, I am trying really fucking hard not to cry right now, okay? Oh my God. Just. Ow. This hurt, but in a really really good way. Like. You've captured perfectly that bittersweet, picking-up-the-pieces thing that inevitably has to happen after someone dies. And ugh. Okay, this is just brilliant, and I have to go blow my nose and stop tearing up now.

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skoosiepants April 6 2008, 22:42:20 UTC
thank you so much, hon *hugs you*

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