SGA Fic: What Happens in the Clubhouse

[skoosiepants]

Title: What Happens in the Clubhouse
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~6,000
Summary: “Right, yes, because traveling through the eleven miles of forest between here and the ‘gate will be a piece of cake when we’re roughly the size of dwarves, with all the strength of a bundle of sticks!”
A/N: Um, yeah. So this is cracky kid!fic with

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[svmadelyn]

*cackles wildly* This whole thing, hilarious. But--but this:

John made a face and almost said, 'girls, yuck,' and Rodney jabbed a finger at him and shouted, "I knew it!"

"Knew what?"

"That you're an intergalactic slut," Rodney accused hotly, and Teyla caught John around the waist with quicksilver reflexes just as he sprung from the floor, arms clamoring to beat the sneer off Rodney's face.

He screamed, "Take it back!" throat burning and tears welling embarrassingly close to the surface.

"No!" Rodney yelled, face red and hands balled at his hips, standing just out of John's reach. "No, I won't, it's true."

"Is not," John rasped brokenly and god. Oh god, he was crying. He was crying and it was officially the worst. Day. Ever.

*IS BROKEN*

[skoosiepants]

*g* thank you! John and Rodney got dangerously fluffy in this with their little arms and noses *smooshes them*

[pentapus]

fluffy in this with their little arms and noses

Yes. That's it exactly. Oh my god, when little Rodney hugged little crying John, I think I died. Not to mention Larry staring at them and Teyla just being fondly amused. :D

[skoosiepants]

*g* glad you enjoyed it :)

[insipid_paragon]

Dude. Dude.

So I might've been kinda sorta bummed and um haven't read any of your SGA fics before because I don't follow the show and I was too busy pouting and desperately selfishly wanting you to come back to Harry Potter but with that confession off my chest I have to say

This fic ROCKS. Oh my god, the laughter. I was howling. Howling. I don't know these people, because I've seen exactly one (1) episode of SGA, approximately forever ago, but...damn it. Damn it, you make me want to know them.

*flails* And oh god Rodney snapped, hands clenched into tiny fists, pale eyes watery, mouth an unhappy, quivering, lopsided line. “I’m going to cry, Colonel. Cry! I never cry! This is all your fault!”

And then Larry said, “Oh my god, I just picked my nose and ate it,” staring in comical horror at his index finger, and Ronon froze mid-pick with a finger up his own nose and narrowed his dark eyes.I'm laughing again just rereading that. Oh shit. *wheeze* All the crying. And wanting Teyla even though she's just a girl (but please don't tell her

[insipid_paragon]

Oh oh! Oh god, except I forgot this part:

John made a face and almost said, ‘girls, yuck,’ and Rodney jabbed a finger at him and shouted, “I knew it!”

“Knew what?”

“That you’re an intergalactic slut,” Rodney accused hotly, and Teyla caught John around the waist with quicksilver reflexes just as he sprung from the floor, arms clamoring to beat the sneer off Rodney’s face.

He screamed, “Take it back!” throat burning and tears welling embarrassingly close to the surface.

“No!” Rodney yelled, face red and hands balled at his hips, standing just out of John’s reach. “No, I won’t, it’s true.”

“Is not,” John rasped brokenly and god. Oh god, he was crying. He was crying and it was officially the worst. Day. Ever. And then he's crying all over Teyla? And then he shifts to crying all over Rodney? *melts* I adore that scene. I can totally see it...Well, you know. I can see the characters my head built from your descriptions, anyway, since I don't really know what they really look like. :D Anyway, that scene's just too damn adorable.

[skoosiepants]

*grins* So... I take it you liked it? Hee. *hugs you* Well, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed this, and maybe won't be so upset with me avoiding updating HP things (which I swear I will get to!). And that you enjoyed it without really knowing the characters means a lot :)

This was so much fun to write. I mean, little kids! But all adult-like!! I fear my biological clock might be ticking *g*

[insipid_paragon]

*blush* Yeah, I liked it. A little. I guess. *grin* Sometimes I think you could write about a bowl of fruit and I'd still walk away laughing and loving it.

*sticks her fingers in her ears and pretends she didn't hear you say anything about biological clocks*

[millefiori]

OMG, I love your writing so much! Your take on the characters and your deadpan-outrageous approach to comedy totally pushes my buttons. Teyla is such a sweetheart here, and savage little Ronon is adorable, and I even fell a little bit in love with Larry! Someone recently posted about liking for John/Rodney stories to include their close connection to their friends and team members, and that's something I always enjoy about your stories--the romance doesn't happen inside a bubble, and the people close to them remain close to them, and that's really neat.

[skoosiepants]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it *g*
the people close to them remain close to them Yes, one of my favorite aspects of fics is the team dynamic. I love background characters... they add so much to a story :)

[xanphibian]

*eyes you* *licks you cautiously and backs away*

OMG LOVE.

[skoosiepants]

*laughs* thank you!

[skoosiepants]

*g* thank you, hon! Ronan is always awesome. too right :) Ronon is the ultimate side-kick.

[skoosiepants]

omg, he was so great in that, with all that anger *nods*