Meh
Ran out of steam with this one:
In under six seconds Brian became a pile of bones under the faucet. He barely had time to scream. The showerhead had been packed with nanoid deplenerators. He had turned on the shower and been unspooled into a gas before he knew what was going on.
I was standing in the doorway. I was frozen there, halfway through drying my hair and looking at the place where my friend used to be.
I had used the shower before him. I was fine. I guess the nanoids were paneled to his keloids in particular.
Weak
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In under six seconds Brian became a pile of bones under the faucet. He barely had time to scream. The showerhead had been packed with nanoid deplenerators. He had turned on the shower and been unspooled into a gas before he knew what was going on.
I was standing in the doorway. I was frozen there, halfway through drying my hair and looking at the place where my friend used to be.
I had used the shower before him. I was fine. I guess the nanoids were paneled to his keloids in particular.
Weak
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