Through Sickness and Health, Part 4

Aug 04, 2010 05:09

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 4
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 3,297
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3

WARNING! Spoilers under the cut.

Cho Kyuhyun, so help me God. )

fanfiction:suju, pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

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bonomanic August 4 2010, 09:40:58 UTC
I don't know whether to be extremely giddy or still depressed right now. >.< I'm so, so glad things are back on the right track now and that's making me hopeful for what's to come, but I'm also still a bit sad from reading this. From reading the struggles and from wanting to hate your Kyuhyun because he behaved like such an asshole (since it was really partly his fault that the situation developed in the first place, that idiot) and wanting to hug him comfortingly and never let go because he was beating himself up over it so much it even made the vengeful thoughts subside. He's such a stupid person in this chapter, but he seems to be stupid because he just doesn't know better or because he was afraid of whatever, so it's hard to stay angry at him.

And now poor Donghae. ;___; How can he be so selfless and really call Kyuhyun to tell him to come back to the dorms? *squishes Donghae* He's been stupid too, although not to the extent of Kyuhyun (and I guess stupidity with relationships is very human), and I can't help but think he wasn't the one to go around with the break-up story. He doesn't seem to be the type to do that. ^^

I'm glad that the foundation for a happy ending is there now. I know enough about cultural theory from college that I'm aware that the need for happy endings is cultural conditioning, blah blah, but I don't care, I want happy endings anyways. xD Especially when the non-happy ending would tear apart the group we love so much (even though fictional here) and even more so because it's Kyuhae and broken!Kyuhae is just so.... heartbreaking. ;___; With all the shit going around in fandom at the moment, I feel like the guys should at least get their happiness as fictional characters. ^^

Am I being a bit incoherent? I feel like I'm like that now. That happens when I write my comment right after reading something, because then my mind's still so full of everything I just soaked up and I have a hard time really ordering my thoughts to formulate a properly coherent answer to it. Sorry about that. :)

Oh, and what I wanted to say: YAY FOR THE END OF QMI! And Donghae can rip away at Mimi's jugular all he wants, as far as I'm concerned, lol. At least with the Mimi from this story. xD
Happy icon to counter the sad mood of this chapter. :D

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skipturnstep August 4 2010, 14:04:39 UTC
What can I say? My Kyuhyun is stupid and my Donghae is too nice XD

You're perfectly coherent! No worries, I know exactly what you're saying. I have yet to write a fic that doesn't have a happy ending, which may be the hopeless romantic in me coming out, but honestly I hate stories that aren't happy in the end. So I think maybe that might be why I write fairy tale-esque stories XD

And your icon is so cute :D

Thanks for reading! The last part will be up within the next few days ^____^

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