Re: Bets now openxxlittlelizxxJune 26 2006, 14:33:50 UTC
is there a reason you are this rude, perhaps it is because secretly you long for happiness, either that or something came back and bit you in the ass, if you even knew me and lewis that well you would know how much we mean to one another and how much love we share and i hope that one day you could find something anything that would make you that happy and as for the language is there a need to be that tasteless and classless o i'm not pregnant we r just damn happy just to clear that up for any one i love lewis and as he tells me so he loves me.o and i'm nineteen and neither of us ae naive or stupid o and who sed we where getting married yet you idiot we r only engaged or do u not understand the concept of a proposal nothing is set in stone. i seriously think sum one may have dumped you either that or you are one bitter twisted person who likes to scorn ppl a little happiness poem just to show i'm a grown up the grown up u will never be i hope your happy i hope ypur happy now i hope your happy now you have chosen this i hope it brings you bliss i hope you get it and dont live to regret it i hope your happy in the end i hope you find love my friend
cos i know i'm happy and have def. found my love go forth and multiply
Re: Bets now openxxlittlelizxxJune 26 2006, 18:46:39 UTC
So why bother getting engaged? If you two are both together in two years then I will formally apologies and wish you both the best.However, during your engagement I suggest you revise your understanding of the English Language.
'is there a reason you are this rude, perhaps it is because secretly you long for happiness, either that or something came back and bit you in the ass,'
This sentence is too long and in need of conjunctions. I suggest:
Is there a reason you are this rude? Perhaps it is because secretly you long for happiness. Either that or something came back and bit you in the arse.'(Ass is so terribly American.
if you even knew me and lewis that well you would know how much we mean to one another and how much love we share and i hope that one day you could find something anything that would make you that happy and as for the language is there a need to be that tasteless and classless o i'm not pregnant we r just damn happy just to clear that up for any one i love lewis and as he tells me so he loves me.
Again, far too long a sentence.Foolish girl.The correct manner is:
If you even knew Lewis and I well, you would know how much we mean to one another and how much love we share.I hope that one day you could find something (or anything for that matter) that would make you equally happy.As for the language, is there a need to be that tasteless and classless? I'm not pregnant. We are very happy. To be clear, I love Lewis and as he loves me.
*Yawn* Another essay of a sentence...
'o and i'm nineteen and neither of us ae naive or stupid o and who sed we where getting married yet you idiot we r only engaged or do u not understand the concept of a proposal nothing is set in stone. i seriously think sum one may have dumped you either that or you are one bitter twisted person who likes to scorn ppl'
I am nineteen years old and neither of us are naive or stupid. Who stated we were getting married yet? We are only engaged or do you not understand the concept of a proposal? A proposal is a verbal contract, a sponsalia par verba de futuro if you will. I think someone may have ended a relationship with you or you are a bitter and twisted person.
Here is the atrocity you call a poem. To repair this would be trying to fix the whole in the sinking Titanic using a Jaffa Cake. Here is a real poem and for the intellects amongst you who will know its meaning.
If dead, we cease to be ; if total gloom
Swallow up life's brief flash for aye, we fare
As summer-gusts, of sudden birth and doom,
Whose sound and motion not alone declare,
But are their whole of being ! If the breath
Be Life itself, and not its task and tent,
If even a soul like Milton's can know death ;
O Man ! thou vessel purposeless, unmeant,
Yet drone-hive strange of phantom purposes !
Surplus of Nature's dread activity,
Which, as she gazed on some nigh-finished vase, Retreating slow, with meditative pause,
She formed with restless hands unconsciously.
Blank accident ! nothing's anomaly !
If rootless thus, thus substanceless thy state,
Go, weigh thy dreams, and be thy hopes, thy fears, The counter-weights !--Thy laughter and thy tears
Mean but themselves, each fittest to create
And to repay the other ! Why rejoices
Thy heart with hollow joy for hollow good ? Why cowl thy face beneath the mourner's hood ?
Why waste thy sighs, and thy lamenting voices,
Image of Image, Ghost of Ghostly Elf,
That such a thing as thou feel'st warm or cold ? Yet what and whence thy gain, if thou withhold
These costless shadows of thy shadowy self ?
Be sad ! be glad ! be neither ! seek, or shun ! Thou hast no reason why ! Thou canst have none ; Thy being's being is contradiction.
'cos i know i'm happy and have def. found my love go forth and multiply' I am glad that you are happy and found love but for the love of God and all humanity, do not multply!
Re: Bets now openskinticket6June 26 2006, 20:52:40 UTC
Hey may i say that an engagement to us is a sign of our love to each other before she goes away for 4 months... I'm an English Language AS and A2 level student and i think on an online 'JOURNAL' you do not need to comply to English Grammar it is for people to see, if you chose to let them, the real you and how you like to live your life. As i'm on the subject of life... get one.
That poem was written by a bloke who is now a writer on broadway and the west end... You can check it out if you don't believe me you lowlife. It's from the musical 'Wicked' and it's called 'Defying Gravity'.
Why, you pathetic piece of earth matter are you still listed as anonymous? If you think your opinions need thrusting down peoples' throats, then you should express who you are... Stop hiding... I am totally in favour of people who want to have their own opinions but as soon as you try and choke people with them then i'd rather shove a hot poker up the pope's arse than come to terms with your living on this planet.
If you want to bitch play your own games in your own head... as soon as you know us as well as most people do you will know that we are totally and utterly in love, and no fucker dressed in cloth will ever come between us.
It's time for me to bid you farewell, because i truthfully wish that you never visit this site again, unless you want to duel under identities. If you don't want to, then take you're depressed soul and flush it away. Hopefully with your life...
a little happiness poem just to show i'm a grown up the grown up u will never be
i hope your happy
i hope ypur happy now
i hope your happy now you have chosen this
i hope it brings you bliss
i hope you get it
and dont live to regret it
i hope your happy in the end
i hope you find love my friend
cos i know i'm happy and have def. found my love go forth and multiply
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'is there a reason you are this rude, perhaps it is because secretly you long for happiness, either that or something came back and bit you in the ass,'
This sentence is too long and in need of conjunctions. I suggest:
Is there a reason you are this rude? Perhaps it is because secretly you long for happiness. Either that or something came back and bit you in the arse.'(Ass is so terribly American.
if you even knew me and lewis that well you would know how much we mean to one another and how much love we share and i hope that one day you could find something anything that would make you that happy and as for the language is there a need to be that tasteless and classless o i'm not pregnant we r just damn happy just to clear that up for any one i love lewis and as he tells me so he loves me.
Again, far too long a sentence.Foolish girl.The correct manner is:
If you even knew Lewis and I well, you would know how much we mean to one another and how much love we share.I hope that one day you could find something (or anything for that matter) that would make you equally happy.As for the language, is there a need to be that tasteless and classless? I'm not pregnant. We are very happy. To be clear, I love Lewis and as he loves me.
*Yawn* Another essay of a sentence...
'o and i'm nineteen and neither of us ae naive or stupid o and who sed we where getting married yet you idiot we r only engaged or do u not understand the concept of a proposal nothing is set in stone. i seriously think sum one may have dumped you either that or you are one bitter twisted person who likes to scorn ppl'
I am nineteen years old and neither of us are naive or stupid. Who stated we were getting married yet? We are only engaged or do you not understand the concept of a proposal? A proposal is a verbal contract, a sponsalia par verba de futuro if you will. I think someone may have ended a relationship with you or you are a bitter and twisted person.
Here is the atrocity you call a poem.
To repair this would be trying to fix the whole in the sinking Titanic using a Jaffa Cake.
Here is a real poem and for the intellects amongst you who will know its meaning.
If dead, we cease to be ; if total gloom
Swallow up life's brief flash for aye, we fare
As summer-gusts, of sudden birth and doom,
Whose sound and motion not alone declare,
But are their whole of being ! If the breath
Be Life itself, and not its task and tent,
If even a soul like Milton's can know death ;
O Man ! thou vessel purposeless, unmeant,
Yet drone-hive strange of phantom purposes !
Surplus of Nature's dread activity,
Which, as she gazed on some nigh-finished vase,
Retreating slow, with meditative pause,
She formed with restless hands unconsciously.
Blank accident ! nothing's anomaly !
If rootless thus, thus substanceless thy state,
Go, weigh thy dreams, and be thy hopes, thy fears,
The counter-weights !--Thy laughter and thy tears
Mean but themselves, each fittest to create
And to repay the other ! Why rejoices
Thy heart with hollow joy for hollow good ?
Why cowl thy face beneath the mourner's hood ?
Why waste thy sighs, and thy lamenting voices,
Image of Image, Ghost of Ghostly Elf,
That such a thing as thou feel'st warm or cold ?
Yet what and whence thy gain, if thou withhold
These costless shadows of thy shadowy self ?
Be sad ! be glad ! be neither ! seek, or shun !
Thou hast no reason why ! Thou canst have none ;
Thy being's being is contradiction.
'cos i know i'm happy and have def. found my love go forth and multiply'
I am glad that you are happy and found love but for the love of God and all humanity, do not multply!
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That poem was written by a bloke who is now a writer on broadway and the west end... You can check it out if you don't believe me you lowlife. It's from the musical 'Wicked' and it's called 'Defying Gravity'.
Why, you pathetic piece of earth matter are you still listed as anonymous? If you think your opinions need thrusting down peoples' throats, then you should express who you are... Stop hiding... I am totally in favour of people who want to have their own opinions but as soon as you try and choke people with them then i'd rather shove a hot poker up the pope's arse than come to terms with your living on this planet.
If you want to bitch play your own games in your own head... as soon as you know us as well as most people do you will know that we are totally and utterly in love, and no fucker dressed in cloth will ever come between us.
It's time for me to bid you farewell, because i truthfully wish that you never visit this site again, unless you want to duel under identities. If you don't want to, then take you're depressed soul and flush it away. Hopefully with your life...
There's no need for poison fucker.
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