Green and White and Red (SGA/SG-1, Cam/John)

Jan 17, 2012 03:20

Title: Green and White and Red
Pairing: Cam/John
Rating: PG-13, for language
Word Count: ~1870
Warnings: Major off-screen injuries to a minor character
Spoilers: Set sometime after "Enemy at the Gate," with spoilers for the episode.
A/N: Written for sg_flyboys for rinkafic for the prompt hurt/comfort.
Summary: Things like this aren't supposed to happen on Earth.

Green and White and Red )

fic type: slash, fandom: sg1/sga, fanfic, pairing: cam/john

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dargai January 17 2012, 08:51:18 UTC
You know, normally I get all gushy when they finally have the relationship!talk because that's an inherent part of the hurt/comfort, the whole 'we recognise how much we really care' conversation. In this case, I loved that it was entirely without words, and you wrote this little snippet of time that wasn't a beginning, end or even middle. It was just kinda like 'this is the time that Cam went to be with John after Dave got shot.' I'm probably not expressing myself very well, but I think that's seriously cool. It's kinda how real relationships go and I liked that effect immensely.

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skieswideopen January 18 2012, 19:08:18 UTC
Thank you so much!

I was trying for something that would reflect how John Cam would do things, and as much as I love that moment of, oh, recognition of affection?, I can't see John being very good at having that kind of conversation. Especially in the context of a romantic relationship. So I thought it had to be mostly non-verbal. I'm glad it came across as reflective of how a real relationship works.

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sherry57 January 17 2012, 09:23:42 UTC
I love when the boys look after each other but I especially like it when John is the one that needs comfort! Loved this!!

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skieswideopen January 18 2012, 19:08:55 UTC
Poor John! He gets whumped so often! ;)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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somehowunbroken January 17 2012, 10:06:15 UTC
I really like how you portray them - they get a lot across without saying much, and that's entirely them. Very nice :)

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skieswideopen January 18 2012, 19:09:51 UTC
Thanks, sweetie! I think Cam could have a conversation about this kind of thing--he's pretty emotionally aware--but John? Not so much. :D

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gaffsie January 17 2012, 10:15:10 UTC
With all the shit the galaxy throws at them on a daily basis, it's no wonder they forget that earth can be a pretty dangerous place too. I'm glad Cam managed to come up with a way to be there for him.

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skieswideopen January 18 2012, 19:11:53 UTC
I do wonder how it would go--would they mentally tag Earth as safe, or would they start seeing danger everywhere? Probably depends on the person.

I was originally going to write this as Cam being deeply frustrated at not knowing how to comfort John, and then it didn't end up going that way, so instead I'll say that it's a good thing Cam's good at figuring people out, because I'm not sure John would be inclined to ask for help.

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rubygirl29 January 17 2012, 12:03:57 UTC
So sweet and caring. I just love Cam. And I'm glad Dave will be all right and John can enjoy some downtime with Cam.

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skieswideopen January 18 2012, 20:05:01 UTC
Cam is a sweetheart, isn't he? We should all be as lucky as John. ;)

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