those who wander 2/?

[blahnicity]

Title: those who wander 2/?
Fandom: Super Junior
Rating: PG13
Pairing: teamfic with smatterings of pairings throughout, action adventure AU
Summary: Kyuhyun is on a mission, of sorts, and it takes him places he never would have considered. AU Action/Adventure.
A/N: Chap One found here. Feedback warmly welcomed. <3

Comments

[blahnicity]

;~; I know it's a little confusing, the next chapter should explain everything. i apologize for your confusion .__.

thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

[blahnicity]

aw thank you :)

thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, I hope you enjoyed it <3

[marchionessdusk]

My heart = still breaking.
This is an amazing story though, I can't wait for the next chapter!

[blahnicity]

D: /gives booboo kiss to heart. :) no owies!

ah good, I'm glad you're liking it :D ty for reading and commenting

[rayneweather]

Just read both chapters now. I'm not having a problem with the pacing at all. You're taking the time for little interludes that help to flesh out peoples' personalities, like Eunhyuk & Donghae eating in the diner. The beginning was confusing because we were dropped right into Kyuhyun's life without knowing all of his past. That's okay with me as I saw it as a writing style and I enjoyed getting little bits & pieces to put together. I still have questions but I know they'll be explained in future chapters. In a way it's kind of neat to be as clueless, if not more, than the protagonist. Sometimes knowing everything is difficult because you want to shout "Oh come on, how can you not figure this out???" to a character. It makes it more exciting. Overall, I'm really enjoying the story. Siwon kind of scares me here, reminds me of Samuel L. Jackson's character in "Pulp Fiction". Heechul is absolutely awesome with a brilliant mind and a great comeback for all of Kyu's questions. I'm loving the interaction between Eunhyuk and

[blahnicity]

Yeah, the next chapter should clear up a lot of confusion, hopefully. I'm glad you're not too frustrated with the wait for information :D.

unf I love pulp fiction :D there will definitely be more about Eunhyuk and Donghae to come, and Siwon will be making an appearance shortly. I hope the next chapter explains all of your questions :D

thank you for reading and commenting <3

[cloudream]

i'm lousy with giving feedback, but i'm really loving this so far.
i remember reading chapter 1 awhile ago, before you made the changes, and i like it even more than i did before. keep it up ♥

[blahnicity]

this is great feedback :)

thank you so much, I hope the revised chapters are enjoyable <3