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[sixthdeadliest]

Personal Information
Name: Cybra
Age: 26
Personal LJ: cybra2003
Email / AIM / MSN: cybrarp(@)gmail.com / cybrarp / NA
Current Character(s): NA

Character Information
Character Name: Agent Six
Fandom: Generator Rex
Source: Basic story information and basic character information (The Generator Rex Wiki article on Six does include some speculation however.)

Comments

[doc_holi]

Ok, now this is just me saying stuff, alright. Don't take it as ultimatum or however you spell that... SEE?!? I'm probably not the best proofreader! ANYWAY! About everything else =.=

History: You may want to clarify a bit more. Just keep in mind that a lot of the mods has never seen GenRex.

Like, when One starts turning EVO. You have that he 'changed'. Or the information about Noah. It doesn't specify what Noah was doing to be a secret kept from Rex.

Six remained ranked as the sixth most dangerous, telling Rex that they weren't ranked by fighting abilities though what precisely ranked them remains a mystery.

I KNOW THE ANSWER 8D! Six said that they weren't ranked by their skill, but by how dangerous they could be. Six also says that he was well on his way to being the most dangerous until he met Rex. Now, a prime example of this would be Dos. Dos was the first one to be ready to kill their teacher if it came to that. Plus, we all hate Dos. It's basically implied that they're ranked by how ruthless, merciless, and heartless they are. Six, of course, comes in last.

Also, a side note, Holiday is SO behind! ;; I'm going to have give her an update or something...

Personality: I think you got it down, but you may have to add more. Mine was a little longer than yours, and I ended up having to add a few paragraphs... hmmmmm. Perhaps put some more info in on his relationship with Holi and White. I would say One, too, but you got him in the history.

Then again, if you think it's good enough as is (which it is) go ahead and send it in. I'm only worried about the length, but they always give you a heads up. If something like that is the case.

First Person: .... D8 wut... what's wrong!??!?! Got me all scared, Cy! BUT it is in great format.

Third Person: I like it! Though, may want to get another eye on it. They might be looking for a different kind of situation... BUT I LIKE IT.

[sixthdeadliest]

Thanks, Lina! I really appreciate you taking the time to do this!

I'll have to mull over on how to flesh out the history a little more. However, aside from those points, I'm not sure what else I could flesh out. Any other suggestions would be helpful.

Hmm...maybe I'll add that thing about the ranking system into the personality section since it seems to give a bit of insight into the kind of person Six is.

The first person thing, I figured Six would think she'd lost her memory if he talked to her and she had no clue about Caesar or other recent events. This is, of course, assuming at the time he didn't realize people could be pulled from different points in the timeline.

Thanks for the opinion on the third person thing. :D I really appreciate it and I'll see if I can't figure something else out just in case. If I do switch, I may keep what I did as a little one shot or something.

Thank you so much, Lina! :D I'll do editing once I get feedback from Rex-mun as well.

[doc_holi]

Oh, it's no problem at all!

I looked over the history again, and I can't really find any other keen points to check up on. Adding the ranking system to the personality is a really neat idea, btw.

WEEEEELL, Rex did tell her about Caesar, but yeah, she has yet to meet him as of right now. So, suspicious!Six towards brother-nutjob would be pretty awesome. As far as Holi knows, he's a genius and a God send XD.

About the third person, the mods like an insight into the character's head. Though, that's near impossible to do with Six, but I think you have a good scenario. You know, the whole training bit. Maybe just Six focusing on something else, instead of being all skeptical about Bending.

BUT YES, OF COURSE get Straya's (Rex-mun's) opinion on all this before messing with stuff. You are very welcome and I was happy to do this ^.^

[sixthdeadliest]

After getting feedback from Straya, I did some expanding of the History and Personality section along with some tweaking of the First Person section. In the History section, I tried to mostly hit upon the episodes where Six played a major part, but please let me know if I missed something. Could you look back through it again and let me know if there's anything else I need to fix or include?

I'm trusting Straya's judgment on the Third Person section which she says I nailed. I figured since she was more experienced at this game, she'd have a definite idea of what the mods were looking for. No offense. :)

[doc_holi]

History: You added so much D8!!! XD But it's cool! I think you added a lot more clarity in there. I believe that one is a go.

And I love the rest of it, too.

OH NO, NO! Take Straya's advice before mine! She's been over there for a year with Rex and even longer (I believe) with another character. She's even on their help staff... I think... Seems like it... ANYWAY. So, yes. Trust Straya's word. Absolutely no offense taken.

I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS TO HAPPEN!!

[sixthdeadliest]

Thank you so much! :D

[naniteknight]

Nah, I'm not part of the help staff. I've just been there for a long time, pretty much since the game started in February of 2009 (my first character was Transformers Animated Ratchet, who I finally dropped not that long ago).