Fic: Skyfire and Thorn (Larxene/Marluxia; NC-17)

[sister_coyote]

Title: Skyfire and Thorn
Words: 1700
Characters/Pairings: Larxene/Marluxia
Rating: NC-17/MA/Not Worksafe
Summary: No one else really understood the slow build of power. Written for harukami, who requested smoking red hot Marluxia and Larxene

Comments

[laylah]

*prrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

The slow tempo of this, the deliberate holding back and building tension -- nngh. Hotness. They play off each other so well, and you make it just absolutely delicious.

[sister_coyote]

:D *prr* I love those two together. and playing with pace and holding off really gets me

[lassarina]

*ded* I love Larxene's point of view in this, and the way you describe lightning as somethign that builds slowly to flashpoint rather than something that is here and gone again. I like the little power games they play, and the way she compares it to Axel, and how she deliberately ignores some of his cues. It's gorgeous. ♥ I am SO glad recced a fic of yours so now I get to read all these shinies ^_^;

[lassarina]

Er, that was meant to be that laylah recced a fic, but LJ ate it! Or I can't type. But either way.

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! Larxene and Marluxia is so much fun because of the power games -- which is also why throwing Axel into the mix is so delightful. ;) I really need to write the Axel/Larxene/Marluxia one of these days.

[sarraceniaceae]

Oh wow hot.

I really like what you did with Larxene in this. I like the way her slowness surprises even Marluxia who knows better, and just how complex a character she is in this.

[sister_coyote]

Thanks! I think Larxene is a terribly interesting character, once you get beyond the stereotype.

[harukami]

Oh, mm. I love elemental play, and this is just delicious. Slow and steady and building, written with the same pacing as their sex -- gorgeous, really, just gorgeous. The final detail with the tip of vine was scathingly hot and I love how you get both the urgency and the slowness of it despite (or becaues of?) the urgency.

[sister_coyote]

Thank you! I'm really delighted that you liked it.

[celes_grant]

Damn, I love reading your stuff no matter what fandom. Makes me wanna find out who they are D:! I dunno who Larxene is, or Marluxia, but their interplay sounds awesome! ^_^ (I only know Axel xD)

[sister_coyote]

*blush* Thank you, that's very flattering! (Larxene and Marluxia are both from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories.)