Simple Touch [Oneshot]

Mar 17, 2009 23:47


Title: Simple Touch [Oneshot]
Author: Siriusmoonpup
Pairing: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If I asked you to roll in the clouds with me and drown in the stars- would you do it?
Author's Note: I miss writing lolz I needed to release some stress after my Chem exam >.>; Hope you guys like <3

Dedicated to chloe1910 - here's some Yunjae, bbcakes =]

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fanfiction: oneshot, couple: yunjae

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anego08 March 18 2009, 04:08:48 UTC
omg, beautful. my fave lines were almost the whol thing but what I really liked were ( ... )

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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:26:25 UTC
thank you bb =]

homggg if only there were more guys like Jaejoong rolling around the earth eh? haha we all want our personal Jae <333 8D

im rather proud of the Yunho line myself so im really glad to know that you liked it =D

whee~ Mem <333

Thank you again for the lovely comment hun!! ^___^

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boxxme March 18 2009, 04:09:28 UTC
i like how you described them as being 'plain', like how they are in their purest form. it is so like jae to ask yunho if he would roll with him in the clouds and drown tgt in the stars; the image is beatiful, just like how you managed to weave your wordds to form this lovely fic~! it was a wonderful read, thankyou^^

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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:27:18 UTC
i think love in it's purest form is the best kind of love out there =]

hehe the line that Jaejoong said was actually a status update on my Facebook LOL i randomly made it up and it inspired me to write Yunjae~

Thank you for reading bb!! ^__^

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moon1084 March 18 2009, 04:15:59 UTC
this was really beautiful and touching

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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:27:33 UTC
^__^ Thank you for your lovely comment bb! <333

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chloe1910 March 18 2009, 04:26:23 UTC
OH.MAI.GAWD!! My bb jackie dedicated this to me!!!

JGLAKJGHAKGJHALGJHGKJADHLGKAHLDKAJHLKJDGAHDFJGAHGJHAK!!!!!
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!

Run off to read and will be back with comment when I'm more coherrent...XD

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chloe1910 March 18 2009, 04:51:36 UTC
Jackie ah!!!! this is simply and plainly B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.!!

Ah, I truly miss this kind of good old fashion, simply and plain fluffyity fluff....

Simply Wonderful!! You never cease to amaze us with your writing, bb....

I hope you your Chem test is ok????


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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:28:47 UTC
Thank yoooooou~ <3333333

^___^ Im really happy that you liked it XDDD im glad it didnt disappoint *snuggles*

::blushes:: you make me shy chloe hehe~

T.T i need to study for chem more :;sighs::

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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:27:58 UTC
LOLOL i dedicated it to you because you made me want to write yunjae!! ^__^

*huggles and snuggles* i hope you approve of this story? <3333

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kisaki94 March 18 2009, 04:31:39 UTC
"If I asked you to roll in the clouds with me and drown in the stars- would you do it?” Jaejoong is so adorable sometimes, yes? >D

this is pure yunjae love <3

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siriusmoonpup March 22 2009, 04:29:09 UTC
^___^ Jaejoong definitely is made of pure adorableness sometimes haha <333

thank you for commenting!! ^__^

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