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oldincisions December 29 2008, 00:07:34 UTC
that was fantastic! very well written, especially how you wrote jasper. awesome job :D

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 00:15:47 UTC
Yeah, first comment :-) Thank you so much!

I love Jasper. It was kind of a fun challenge to try to get his voice right for me. I put a lot of effort into pulling what I could from what SM does give us. I'm glad it worked for you.

This is just one of those scenes that I always felt was missing from the books. I needed to see how Jasper could go from "opps, sorry, nearly killed you" to playing chess with Bella.

Thanks again for commenting!!!!

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oldincisions December 29 2008, 00:26:08 UTC
absolutely, I think sm leaves a lot of opportunities for holes in her books to be filled with fanfics, which is awesome. I hope to read more from you soon!

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 00:26:58 UTC
Definitely, I have a few more planned already.

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not_from_stars December 29 2008, 00:40:29 UTC
Oh! I loved this so much.

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 00:45:31 UTC
Yeah! Thank you so much! I love comments. I'm so glad you liked it.

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not_from_stars December 29 2008, 00:46:42 UTC
I love comments, too, so when I find something I like, I *have* to comment.

Also, if you ever need a beta, let me know?

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 00:52:48 UTC
Beyond awesome! I have some fics planned, so I will definitely be asking for some beta help. I always have my work betaed before posting, but I'm new to Twilight, so I didn't have any Twilight friends to ask.

I was checking out your profile. We have so much in common. I love Charmed, too, and Cole/Phoebe were always my favorite. And you even like Torchwood. I like so many of your fandom interests.

So, one last thing to ask so I can add you to the right group on my friends list. Are you over 18? I'm not planning to write anything NC-17 Twilight, but you never know. I've been known to write some smut in the past.

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lucdarling December 29 2008, 00:56:13 UTC
that was fantastic! you captured his voice so well!
I'm certainly eager to read more. Friends so I can read whatever else you've written?

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 01:17:50 UTC
Wow! I'm glad you thought it was fantastic. Thanks so much for your comment.

I plan on writing a lot more Twilight fanfics, particularly hurt/comfort fics for Alice/Jasper and Edward/Bella. I'm so glad you want to read more.

I friended you back and added you to the 18+ list, so you can read anything I have posted or will post. This is actually my first Twilight fic, so there aren't any previous to read. But, you can check out the other fandom stories I've written (check out the master list of fanfic link on the side). But, as I said, more Twilight to come. Guess I should get writing. :-) Yeah for friends.

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lucdarling December 29 2008, 04:00:53 UTC
hurt/comfort is my favourite secret.
I'm working my way through your recommended fanfic. Could I read the epic Weiss Kreuz without knowing anything about the fandom? It looks interesting, but I know squat about the show itself, other than it exists!

*squees* I'm so excited for more Alice/Jasper from you! It will be amazing, I'm sure. I didn't set the bar too high, did I? ;)

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 04:08:47 UTC
You can definitely read the Weiss story without knowing anything about the fandom. It actually is so well written, it's got more plot and story that the anime itself. It will explain everything you need to know. The only thing I would tell you to start you reading is that each character in it has a special power. Crawford is a precog (the Alice of this world), Schulich is a telepath (the Edward), and Nagi (the one in my icon here) is telekinetic. The first chapter is all set-up, so be sure to read chapter 2. Chapter 2 is where the good stuff really start. That story is by far the best thing I've ever read in any fandom ever. But, I do warn you, it's ADULT. If you decide to read it, you simply HAVE to talk to me about it. I've never been able to convince anyone else to read and discuss it with me.

I'm excited to find another h/c lover that's into Twilight. Do you have any fic recs for me?

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wendies December 29 2008, 01:03:42 UTC
omg this was good!!!
Good job!!! :D

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 01:18:19 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting.

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niceiceedward December 29 2008, 02:02:07 UTC
Well, um, that was very beautiful.

I've turned into such a Bella/Jasper ship fan that it skews how I look at fics containing the two of them.

However, this was a very interesting little fic and I think it ended sweetly.

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 02:12:03 UTC
He he, feel free to write your own little ending to this then. It would be pretty easy. I've already got them hugging for you ;-)

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting.

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niceiceedward December 29 2008, 02:26:47 UTC
Oh God! LOL, I have! I've written too many Jasper/Bella stories. I'm trying to work on other's now.

It's hard, because I'm so drawn. Also, I read some things Stephenie Meyer said about Jasper and Alice, and I realized I was committing sacrilege by writing about Jasper and Bella. But the potential seemed so realistic. Jasper manipulates emotions, and feels them too. Who in the house is giving off the most excruciating emotions during the series. Bella and Edward, why? Pent up sexual frustration...next thing I knew..Jasper/Bella fics galore. LOL

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sirenprincess December 29 2008, 02:46:10 UTC
Well, Jasper and Alice are inseparable to me. Alice gave him hope for the first time and then his life was suddenly so much better and all.

BUT, your theory is interesting. It actually makes me want to write Jasper and Alice going at it hot and heavy because Edward and Bella aren't in the other room. God the possibilities there. I think you might have just inspired an NC-17 story there.

Of course, you know, once Bella's vamped, you could foursome them. I have no problems with orgy fic either. He he.

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